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Man with a brown hat

by Rajesh Nath

Final Rating: 6.63. Finished 6 out of 162 entries.

1,158 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Rajesh Nath

Description: Thanks to malcolm rig.

Experience: 5 YEARS

Time taken: 7 DAYES

Comments:

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Leonardo Ferrò:

good animation, but you need more work on lip sync

Aaron Clement:

Nice staging. and lighting. Love the antics, too! Great work!

Muhammad Arsal:

awesome!

Amartya Mukherji:

Very good animation and camera cuts. One of the best so far..
but I felt the actions are a bit too much for the audio. Its my opinion though :)

Jasmine Moody:

Some of the lip sync looks a bit off but other than that: quite nice. Decent environment and acting.

mithun:

nice but need more work on lipsing

Liviu Boar:

great acting. too bad about the lip sync

Wa'ad:

I like the animation and the idea.
At the beginning when she offers him the money I haven't noticed that except at replay.
I would suggest if you made the guy look at the girl first then when she offers him the money he changes his eye direction towards the money which would drag the attention of the viewer towards it.

Good luck :)

Abhishek Banerjee:

awesome work.....loved it

Vanessa Gonzalez:

Great animation. My one observation is that I feel that when he points at her with his left hand before pushing the money towards her it goes by a little fast. Maybe if you have him point little sooner or just remove it altogether it might not seem like it's too much. But that's just my opinion, great animation nonetheless!

Danny Kneip:

Nice cut on movement. The lip sync seems a tad off - like his mouth isn't opening, but his lips are. All I see is the white of his teeth, which means the sync isn't reading. A pity.. it's a nice animation. I think the final "2-finger point" is a bit much, but the rest of the hand animation flows really well.

Ryan D Lowe:

Too many acting beats here. Try to simplify. If you removed one aspect I feel it would be much stronger. Don't mis understand what you have is fantastic, it just needs a bit less so the audience has time to breathe!

Jim P:

Really good.

Thomas Edward:

Nice motion and poses! Perhaps a little too fast and expressive for this particular audio clip, but great work regardless.

Ray Lim:

Great work! Good use of props and framing. Really kept the animation alive. Well animated as well. Only thing I would've like to see was pushing the poses a little bit further. 11/11!