Final Rating: 3.43. Finished 135 out of 162 entries.

151 views including the voting period.

NEXT

Animator: Jermaine

Description: A man on the phone

Experience: 1 1/2 as a student

Time taken: around 10 days

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Sylwia Bomba:

Nice acting!

Per Cardell:

Overall pretty good animation. But around frame 140 the phone is stuck in it's little ik-world. Cool appart from that. Keep goin'

Vanessa Gonzalez:

I like what you were going for, the only problem is that it feels unfinished, especially the lip sync. If you plan on finishing it though, I'd suggest a little less sudden movements during and after he says the word "lie".

Jack Curran:

looks like a decent animation but could use a liitle more touch up!

Aaron Clement:

Fingers felt a little stiff... a bit wiggly overall... one of the better ones, tho.

Jez:

I've got the message ... that's the 3rd phone call, I'm placing myself on "do not call list" ...lol ... to all calling guys out there.... The author who got the idea 1st i give him/her credit for it , unless you all came with it accidentally....

Amartya Mukherji:

I felt acting could have been a bit more matured.
timing .. work on the timing. Very nice try though

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Kyu-bo Choi:

Lip sync seems to be off. Especially when he say the word "expression".