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Guilty Satisfaction

by David Vann

Final Rating: 3.56. Finished 130 out of 162 entries.

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Animator: David Vann

Description: A suspicious character emerges from his house to explain the scene.

Experience: Final year student studying animation at Bradford University

Time taken: 2 Weeks

Comments:

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Romana Sonntag:

I like the idea!! :)
but i guess the poses are not clear enough.
f.e.: frame 108 - he looks disappointed for no reason. and his switch from shy to evil is not motivated.

Aaron Clement:

Good creativitly. Needs work on the body mechanics.

Amartya Mukherji:

Nice try ... There is scope for improvement.

Danny Kneip:

So many gestures, so little motivation.

Ryan D Lowe:

Too many ideas shoved into one acting beat. Subtle going forward and try to line it up with just a single idea.

Robert Holmen:

He's overacting.

Richard Clark:

acting is a little over the top. Should dial that back. It's also too pose to pose.