Guilty As Charged
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Brad Bradbury:
Interesting take on this audio clip. I like the chin pull.
Blaine Toderian:
This is entertaining! I love the cartoony motion you've gone for! There are only a few things distracting me... the way he prepares to pull the convict and the settle give the impression that the convict is rather weightless... also, the bouncing of the paper/arm afterwards is a little distracting.
Marco:
Really good!!
Sean Thorpe:
WOOOOOOOO thats what im talking about..... this piece is soooo strong. You have that great chaotic mixture of subtlety interupted by popping exaggerated but not all over the place movements. The leg out step was genious. Whoever you are keep on rockin.
Aaron Jonas:
very nice
Matt Hirengen:
wow. nice job.
Jose Manuel Gabin:
I love it, but the facial expression is a little bit exaggerated, in my opinion.
Alonso Soriano:
love that walk.
I think the big guy should try and hide what he's doing a little more obviously.
I think the brushing the shoulder is a fine idea, but I didn't read it at first, I think it's because the hand really changes shape on the shoulder, if he affected the shoulder more strongly before hand to call a little more attention to it, and if the hand was stiffer (think whisk broom) instead of soft like it is (like a handkerchief) I think it would be more effective.
I love bishop's facial expressions.
The big guy I like how he scoots down the table (but I think this distracts from the shoulder wiping stuff also), but otherwise I'm not sure how he feels about bishop, is he afraid, is he contemptuous?
Excellent work.
Hernán Bruna:
Super Awesome!!!
Jeff Simon:
you nailed the face grab
Corey McDaniel:
cool !
Manjoe Chan:
love the interaction betweent he characters. it's interesting and i love frame 170 to 190
Salvador García Luque:
Excellent animation, unexpected, explosive and fluid, but the lipsync needs work.
Martin Silfvast:
love the guards walk! Very nice lots of character!
Wesley Schneider:
very nice...
Brad Regier:
Way to go, Anthony!
Adriano Mariotto:
Awesome acting for me, lipsync very good too
David Higgins:
I like this.
KISHORE:
wow ...
Thomas Dumont:
Really good acting between the two
fawzi zidane:
nice job, maybe to much flex in your paper xD
Prashant:
Really good work ....
Lauren Andersson:
great work
barak drori:
your acting is the bomb
Johnne Tyson:
I don't get their relationship but this is really nice. Your characters freeze a little at certain sections.
Kelly Perez:
nice job.
Ashley Stringer:
well done
Matt Kelly:
nice work, a few too many accents that are all the same level
Chase Shields:
Hmm, I liked the guy talking but was not very comfortable with the other character. The acting was good but just something did not feel right.
Great job!
David Shum:
Wow, very cool!
Only wish you framed the shot a little better.
There's alot of empty space on the top of the shot, and the paper is really cramped and off frame in the bottom of the of shot.
You probably want the character's eyelines on the top third of your framing. :D
I like the set up, and the acting of your characters. Even tho I don't know too well what they're saying, everything is reading very well! Good job!
Andrew:
wow, really fantastic. i'd love to see your workflow so i could make my animation look like this!
Dave Blanchette:
Great job! Good clarity with a tough dialogue.
Richard Clark:
Great work. Really great poses and timing
Ryan Chan:
Awesome job. Not much to say cept that it was fun to watch.
Igor Medovshikov:
Very nice! But I noticed one thing 180 -184 the right elbow of the little guy seems to snap a little bit and feels too much like ik to me. Other than that a fantastic piece of work!
Erik Lee:
very nice! I love he grab his chin! awesome!
Ivan:
wow nice animation and the lips, very clear,
Juan Calderon:
not bad, looks good. I don't know why papers at the end, but other than that, not to shabby.
Tristan Prior:
Wow, well done! Really enojoyed this. very fluid motion and good choice of acting :)
Nemanja Djordjevic:
Great characters! Like it!
Eric Huelin:
This is a great animation.
Magin Marques:
really original
ayush raizada:
good effort, i like it, expression of fatty characer was gud..........
rob eddy:
wow that's great stuff
Frank G:
I like the acting style chosen with broad gestures. The spacing and timing works very well. The support actor probably won't get a credit in the awards but I think he also has a fine future. This sequence is the firecracker.
Nicola:
Fab!









Animator: Anthony Travieso
Description: One last plea, but all the evidence points to guilty.
Experience: 2 yrs
Time taken: 2 weeks