Another day, another loss

Final Rating: 4.41. Finished: 28 out of 82 entries.
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Animator: Martin Silfvast

Description: A man ventilates his frustration after another unsuccessful day in court.

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: a few nights

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Hugo Cierzniak:

You're late on the text. Make you're poses and you lipsynch before.

Brad Bradbury:

It doesn't seem that the movements are timed to the audio. The lip sync or the hand gestures.

Juan Calderon:

the lip sync is off and I also felt some Performances shots were a little off. but good effort

Renato Fochi:

Good movements and acting, i just think the lipsync could be better.
Great work anyways:)

Bruno Carias Fogaça:

the time audio audio wrong... your animation has a beautiful acting . congrats !

Matt Hirengen:

good job. I would've liked to see the left hand do a little though.

Hernán Bruna:

He is too calm! what happenned with the another hand? the lipsyng needs more syncronization, the animation is cool indeed, i like the soft movements of it.

Jose Manuel Gabin:

The lipsync needs more work, but the animation is good.

gerardo:

nice acting... maybe too much moves

but I think you need work more your lipsync... that is your main area to get better.

Ian Hernandez:

Lip sink seems off. but it looks good

Ashley Stringer:

i really like the acting in this animation, i love how you have used the fingers to explain when he is speaking.

great work well done

Kensaba:

Audio is delayed, but very good movement, except for last of right hand at "que se cre?" Keep going

Yuriko:

Nice acting but why lip sinc is out?

Blaine Toderian:

I'm not sure what happened, but it seems like some of the gestures are not timed to the dialogue... The motion looks good!

David Higgins:

Dialogue appeared very offset from teh action (ie several frames)

KISHORE:

lip sync misses it too many blinks i think

rob eddy:

hand gestures look good. i think the right leg should move at times throughout, currently movement looks minimal and only front back, could use some left right, especially around 180 when his torso has leaned over. think leg should move to screen right some

Calle Halldin:

the sound seem to lag, otherwise it would have been a nice piece.

Dane Winn:

very nice, would've been nice to see the character move around a bit more, also i think you need more mouth shapes, but good work

Matt Kelly:

nice polish.. the acting choices seem off

Alex Jansen:

The sound is off. He also seems too reserved for how angry the audio is.

David Thomson:

The lip sync looks a little funny, though I cant tell you why cause im not that good at animation.

Andrew:

too much from that one hand. sync doesn't match up. nice movement though

Jonay O. Urbina:

I think the video goes abit behind the audio

Mark Wheeler:

Work on defining some of the lip sync and this will be looking nice. Try exaggerating some of the body poses and anticipations.

David Shum:

I think if you take out 5-8 frames from frame 51-62, then the shot would work alot better.

That gesture in frame 51-62 is way too slow. And everything after that felt like its late. Might want to take a look into that

Alonso Soriano:

the movement and acting choices would be good, but overall it is a bit too repetitive of waving with the arm and waving with the torso

Michael Carter:

lip sync was off...

Ryan Chan:

Nice smooth animation and acting. But i feel like you could've utilized his left arm more, especially for the bigger accents.. then just have it come back to the knee. I just would've liked to see more movement from it. Also the fingers like a little straight and stiff =T

Igor Medovshikov:

Lip sync needs work!

Salvador García Luque:

The lipsync is not very good. and the character is just sit there waving is arm

Henning Koczy:

Nice, but no one moves like that... a little too active and repetitive.

Fernando Porcel:

Nice work.

Nice gestures, but the face and mouth lacks a lot on sync with the dilaog, only a comment. Good work. Cheers!

Giuseppe:

I think the sound track should be heard a couple of frames sooner. I like many of the right hand poses. But it gets probably too busy towards the end. I think his left hand shouldn´t stay so still during the entire shot.

Richard Clark:

your lipsinc seems off