Nick Malutama:

The perspective is a little bit off and the animation is not really smooth.

Rachel G.:

I love the puff of smoke. I know it's a small detail, but I really loved it.

Ashley Stringer:

WOW, i love anything 2D like this so im a little biased here but really this is a great peace of work well done.

Andrew:

i like the turn

Andrew Harding:

The drop of his cigar/cigarette seems bouncy to me. Then, when he turns his body the first time, away from the camera, it feels a bit robotic, as if maybe he's on a turn-table rather than moving himself. The movement of the hand and arm in frame 110 to where they are in frame 111 needs more exposure (you can fast-in to the second pose, but it's too quick a transition at the moment).

Mark Persson:

Very nice!!! Good to see some drawings for once! Hmm...

okay... The characters body movement feels nice and good, you have manage with most of it. Still some polishing with it and it could be pefekt.
The face expressions and the lipsync needs more work... It needs more expression how "he thinks". Show much more whats happening in his brain !D

Keep up with the good work!
/Marq

Thomas Dumont:

A little bit too symmetrical and the motion when is show his back his not very beautiful. Anywhay I like the overall. Good effort and go on this whay man.

Johnne Tyson:

The poses from 1 to 51 aren't really reading. Same things at 76-85. The rest is great and good mouth animation. His face is a little small to read in this format. Probably looks great up close.

Mark Wheeler:

Character slightly begins speaking before the cigarette leaves his mouth. More anticipation into his poses.

David Shum:

Pretty cool!
One quick comment I'd like to give you is that the dude's back is very very stiff. His upper body is always inline with his hips. Could use some upper body movement, and also some hip movements too.

Like, frame 66, you have a nice pose of him leaning forward. But visually he's still very stiff up and down straight lines. You can feature that by angling him , and lean a bit more on his right arm.

Alonso Soriano:

a few too many acting ideas, take one or two out to make the remaining ones stronger

the dragging the finger in the first few frames would be more obvious if the forearm was more vertical and pulled behind the body

rob eddy:

i really like the poses. frames 84-87 feel abrupt in the left hand though. he goes from holding the 'TODAS' posed to touching his nose very fast. great stuff!

Erik Lee:

nice drawing!

Juan Calderon:

I don't think the character needed to look away it interrupts the viewer from seeing his rage

Fernando Porcel:

Cool work

Perhaps more smooth and fluid movement between the key poses, only a comment. Cheers!