Brad Bradbury:

I like the demonstrate action. I think you have too many actions and poses for this dialog. you don''t need a new action for each word. simplify.

David Thomson:

i think there is way to much movement on this animation. all the movement is turned up to 10 on this one

Paul Naas:

He moves through too many poses in such a short time. Pick the strongest storytelling poses and linger there - let them read.

rob eddy:

he moves from pose to pose really quickly but the animation still has a nice feel. like it, good job

Alonso Soriano:

pretty good ideas, a little too much though, simplify the acting choices a little (1 or 2 fewer key ideas) and then you need to flow from pose to pose better, kind of pops into them currently

Blaine Toderian:

The illusion is almost complete! You're acting is very well done -- the ending is so natural! However, the effect is broken by the abruptness of his movements. He's lacking a bit of physicality; add some weight, overshoots, anticipations, and check the arcs. If you can make it look like he's effected by gravity, you'll have it!

Kensaba:

I´ll make a critique to this shot that fits to me either: you tried to put too much gestures, all good, but there is not enought time, so they become quick, so they are not readable. The holds are important to frame the movements, and to make them readable to the audience.

Rachel G.:

I really like his movements and the way the chair reacts to him and the way he does. It all feels very fluid. Really nice job.

Jonay O. Urbina:

i love the seond half

Martin Silfvast:

Very nice poses! some of the arm movements seems a bit too wide.

Yuriko:

cool, just at "la sala lese" too brokenly. Try to work out problems with arcs there.

David Higgins:

Looked way too busy action/pose wise. It may have been better to build the action to a peak instead.

Thomas Dumont:

To many hand motions for me.

Mark Persson:

Nice with the chair thing... changing the angle!D Good body language. Good face excpression, good lipsync. The character feels alive and i can feel how he is thinking.

But it needs more work.... some polish everywhere...
The background doesnt work, its to soft and blured from the character!

Keep up with good work!
/Marq

Julio Cardenes:

its fine, but too fast, after the movement of the index fingers is very very fast... but i thing that you are good :)

Lauren Andersson:

great stuff

Mark Wheeler:

Some actions feel too quick and forced. Work on anticipation?

Ashley Stringer:

looks good except i didn't like all the twinning.

never the less well done, keep up the good work

Andrew:

acting is great especially near the end

Michael Carter:

I think that most of the energy should be at the "todas" line and not in the beginning, but overall very good...

Alex Jansen:

He moves from one pose to the other very quickly...it almost looks clicky because of that

Salvador García Luque:

very good animation, but the lipsync doesn't watch very well

anvitha.a:

its too good...but need to smooth well...

Eric Huelin:

Seems the poses change too swiftly.

Tim W:

I think it would be so much more powerful with less gestures.

ayush raizada:

too many gestures...., may be u shud concentrate on less gestures

jose maria pereyra:

muy buena
very good 7 points

Giuseppe:

There are a lot of very good poses here. I really like the start and the end of the shot. There is probably a little bit too much going on in the middle part.

Mel Gonzalez:

This is the first one ive seen that i feel captures the mood and mannerisms of the gentleman speaking this line. Kudos, animation is solid, a little more refining needed to really help it stand out.