Andrew:

fantastic

Brad Bradbury:

Awesome drawing style.

HariNarayan:

Fantastic !!

Blaine Toderian:

This is great, you've nailed the character! Getting nitpicky; The few steps he takes toward the bench feel a little awkward, and I feel that 'todas' could have a little more punch to it!

Andrzej Dybowski:

Awesome!! The best for me. And what's more 2d. I love the smoke. Looks really realistic. Good job!

rob eddy:

really good stuff

Matt Hirengen:

very nice job. great unique acting choices.

Jose Manuel Gabin:

I really admire the 2D animation. It's fliud and expressive. I love it.

Carlos Fins:

A few too many poses in the performance. Good technique and draftsmanship tho

Rachel G.:

The little touches, such as the primary character straightening out his sleeve, really make this pop. Wonderful job.

Martin Silfvast:

Very nice character design! I like the touch with him grabbing his tie. Good effort!

Ashley Stringer:

wow great seance of attitude, you have produced a fantastic peace of work here in my opinion.

well done

Vinod Kanna. K:

Good job..... if you could 've applied moving-hold or any reaction for the second character, the whole animation would look better..

Prashant:

WOW .... Awesome work .....

KISHORE:

wow like the concept and the animation is great i loved it

Yuriko:

It is beautiful!

Thomas Dumont:

Beautiful. What a pitty that the end is cutted

Lauren Andersson:

nice smoke inhale at the beginning.

Johnne Tyson:

AWWW Cuts off at the last beat. REally nice.

Anthony Travieso:

Great work! It feels like the animation ends before he can finish the last word. And i would save those papers for end. To me at the end it sounds like papers or something like that. I think the throwing of the paper would work better at that point.

Mark Persson:

Really nice! Love the drawings! Original character. The voice works perfect to the character. He feels quite alive!

But, i would like to see more face expression. lipsync okay!

Keep up with the good work!

Dane Winn:

vyer nice animation, i really like the style and the characters you've drawn, i think you should try and get the character on screen left to move a bit, even some eye blinks, and some acknowledgement would be good

Mark Wheeler:

Great movement, fantastic lip sync. Right character could use some up and down motion when taking his steps.

Tim W:

I really liked the set up. Think it would be more dynamic if animated the second character, even just a little bit.

Matt Kelly:

work on the blend between the first part where he's smoking and when he starts talking.. show that he's ABOUT TO TALK

Dave Blanchette:

Great drawing and character!
But it doesn't seem to support the dialogue.

Jeff Simon:

great work

brandonbeckstead:

Really nice work! It seems to cut off at the end before he can finish the last word.

David Thomson:

Nice!!! seems to get cut short though

David Shum:

Hahaha. "Courtroom" I get it.

One thing I want to see, is for the coach to bend his knees, and have him play around with some up and down motion of his COG.

Very nice animation otherwise! :D

Alonso Soriano:

great skill, acting choices could pull me in more, maybe acting to the camera could have helped that

Juan Calderon:

you didn't finish the last word of the lip sync. other wise this it purty good, the second character there is static thats a no no, I know we have little time, but he doesn't move.
but i like this piece you have skills, his performance is good, but he need to have big extreme when he says, "TODAS!"

Daria Rybakova:

Very nice animation! +11

Richard Clark:

Great work. Just the one section frame 109 to 135ish, his weight is a little off getting into that next pose.

Igor Medovshikov:

Very nice.

Erik Lee:

nice drawing!

Salvador García Luque:

ItÅ› great, just one thing, the moment in which the fat guy say "todas" that pose is a little out of context, itdoesn't seem that he is scolding that guy, it's more like showing the whole place.

Tristan Prior:

Wow, great animation. Love some of the acting choices... scratching the arm etc.

Nemanja Djordjevic:

Great work! Good acting! I like the character, very strong

Candace Giancanelli:

nice design, I'm not sure the significance of the basketball player. Nice smoke animation. Great subtle animation with the roll up of sleeve and holding tie back. The last pose feels awkward for his body type. The raised foot should be closer to his body, bending in.

Jorge Zagatto:

C'mon, I LOVED this piece: design, animation, timing (the good use of three speeds), lip sync, overlapping, everything!! Theres a lot of things to see and enjoy. I can feel life at that inhale!

That´s those kind of animation one adores to keep watching over and over! Congratulations, you deserve the prize!!

My only critique i should say... at the middle he stands maybe too long in a frontside view (from the camera) which sometimes can make him a little flat or not seem natural once he´s talking down to a man at his stage leftside. But anyway, it doesn´t take too long to worry about. And the way you conducted it out made the whole thing runs perfectly!

It got appeal!!
Loved the basketball player too!!

luv2animate:

Awesome !!