YatiYati:

Nice acting...but i think your lip sync not one yet......

Brad Bradbury:

The poses don't really have anything to do with the audio, and the aren't happening on the same beats as the audio. You also don't need a new gesture for each word.

Blaine Toderian:

It's a good start, plenty of strong poses. Try using only a few of the Most Important poses to make it clearer.

rob eddy:

body performance is good, i'd recommend the first motion, the first cada cosa, be just the right arm, since you do a two arm cross for the second cada cosa too. add the lip sync you'll have a good piece

Rex Lai:

I like the fact that you try to incorporate lines of action into your poses, but I think that some of them are overdone and repetitious. If you're just working on the gestures, they need to be executed with more purpose.

Andrew:

antics are nice but overall acting needs work

Thomas Dumont:

I think he needs lypsinc ^^

Curtis:

Feels very posed! Almost as if he's just striking poses like a fashion model. Timing in his body needs to be broken up more. Everythins starts and stios on the same frame. Try filming some reference, and watch it carefully.

Mark Persson:

Nice!

Keep up with good work!

Ashley Stringer:

apart form the twinning at the start i like this one.

well done

Mark Wheeler:

Check balance on all posses: the far lean forward pose makes it feel as though he would fall forward.

Aabid Dhamani:

no facial, timing is off and entry doesn't seem to be complete, you can do it

james:

too much twinning

Alonso Soriano:

don't need to hit a new pose for every sentence

Jorge Zagatto:

hmm. Your poses do not connect one to each other. Ok, they tell a story but cannot express character emotions. It feels more like he's dancing or jumping from pose to pose with no apparent reason. It also lacks a 'point' in acting. Put more effort at it next time.

But it got rythm anyway. You used the three speeds in a very clever way!

Alan Fregtman:

hey man, what happened to the mouth animation? :/

Juan Calderon:

good effort the performance was ok, but his anger and frustration doesn't show

Fernando Porcel:

Nice work
What happened with the mouth?? :)
Some nice poses, but the motion of the arms is a bit twined in many of them. With out expression on the face the animation lost force and appeal. Only a comment :) Cheers!

Rómulo Lazarde:

no lipsync at all