Cada cosa

Final Rating: 2.95. Finished: 67 out of 82 entries.
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Animator: Jose M. Pan

Description: Animation for august competition. It needs improvment but I'm a little tired. I've tried to work in my free time, but it's difficult... But I'm happy, cause I learnt a lot

Experience: I've started with animation 2 or 3 years ago, but I can't practice all the time

Time taken: On my free time since august 3 or 4

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HariNarayan:

seems like a robot !!

Mark Persson:

Nice work but needs more work!

rob eddy:

nice start, that walk looks like it has nice rotation but maybe could use a little move up down when he's sraightening and bending his legs. i like the todas arms and hands pose, but maybe offset them a little going in to that pose, good stuff

Manjoe Chan:

Not the character seems kinda stiff especially when he's walking forward. Maybe try and think about the poses some more.

Spencer Barber:

He moved like a robot

Johnne Tyson:

Seems really stiff. With it being so far away, it's hard to see what he's feeling and saying. Could benefit from a closer camera angle.

Ashley Stringer:

i like this one but i feel i would change something but i just can't put my finger on it, i know that not helpful but i thought i would say.

never the less well done

Chase Shields:

Seems a little empty and the walking looks a little blocky.

But besides that I think this looks good!

Alonso Soriano:

great try, you need more work on the fundamentals, but you've got a good sense of where to go once you have that
(learn to get a better sense of weight in, which is usually shown by the contrast of the weight being pushed upwards and then the legs catching it as it comes down, and get more flexible with the spine)

Fernando Porcel:

Nice work

The motion of the character is a bit chopy and rigid. Take care on the motion arcs, more curve movements for the arms and body. Try to transmit weight on your charecter too. Only a comment. Good work. Cheers!

Salvador García Luque:

the character is very very rigid

Nicola:

Nice effort and I like the poses but the animation seems a little bit stiff.