Brad Bradbury:

Lots of floaty going on here. put more poses inbetween things and make your own breakdowns. The computer makes floaty inbetweens.

Paul Naas:

Kinda floaty, and he drifts through the key poses without ever settling on any of them. Hold on the keys and let them read.

Blaine Toderian:

I think there are some good poses in this piece, but you move through them too quickly: pause, and hold them so we can see them.

Alonso Soriano:

I don't understand his acting beats, he doesn't seem to be trying to project 1 single idea at a time. Attacking the reporter doesn't seem justified after talking to him, and the impact doesn't feel strong enough to fling him back. Reporter's head shake is so violent, it should really be affecting the rest of the body since it is such a large mass.

Mark Persson:

Nice work!
The character are to slow and the lipsync needs more work!

rob eddy:

his final expression is funny stuff. nice job. when he comes to and starts speaking he looks up to the left, migh be good to start right in on the reporter and save that look up left for the big TODAS

Matt Hirengen:

it's a little floaty, but good acting choices.

douglas anderson:

Seems like it all moves a bit slow. The timing seems to be to even throughout. And double check the lip sync towards the end it seems a bit off.

Ashley Stringer:

really nice well done

Andrew:

his moves are too floaty. need some faster one to mix it up

Ivan:

always in motion

Dane Winn:

you need to vary the timing, and the facial expressions need to be sped up, that final pose doesnt quite look right either

Yasmin:

Lip sync needs more work and I think the change of scene is great.

Pooya Gharahgozli:

floaty...not quite there on the poses either.
good effort though.