But He's Guilty!

Final Rating: 4.44. Finished: 25 out of 82 entries.
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Animator: Daniel Morgan Walsh

Description: Hello everyone. This is my first time entering the contest. I had a blast doing it and am excited to see how well my animation will. I appreciate you guys viewing it and am more than open to critiques.

Experience: Just graduated from 3D Program. Maybe 1 year including school.

Time taken: Rough guess 60 hours.

Comments:

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Kensaba:

Avoid twinning. Keep going

Matt Hirengen:

great acting and execution. His stance looks a little painful by the end of the clip though.

Alonso Soriano:

pushing off from the table is a big jump in spacing. The big pull gesture feels twinned. And it feels pretty odd that the stands with his knees bent for so much of it.

David Higgins:

The movement on 'Todas' seems too extreme emotionally compared to the rest.

Yuriko:

Like it !Especially last expression.

Thomas Dumont:

the stand up position seem not real but nice effort

rob eddy:

looks good, really like that hand on hand slap from 146-162. i think his weight should shift to screen right a little on frames 116-118 when his right foot is off the ground

Ashley Stringer:

good work well done

Matt Kelly:

a little floaty through the held poses.. initial pose is a little cliche... most of the second half of the animation shows very little weight in the hips and stance

Alex Jansen:

Great acceleration in emotion, starting with a more reserved possition and esculating his anger.

Claudia:

it's looks awesome with the lip syncing. i say just a much closer shot to appreciate it more!

Ivan:

your almost there

Juan Calderon:

it's ok, but I saw some trouble with animating his root, you might have wanted to move him around a little, because right now his pose is stationary, Walt disney recommended animators to always have your character be moving forward, or backwards, but it helps.
your lips sync was ok

Rex Lai:

Nice points of exaggeration. I think there is one too many gestures with the hands at the end, though. The last pose needs to be more convincing. Generally, as well, you should end off the animation with a relaxed pose. Overall though, pretty good.

Mark Persson:

Nice! You have all the basic movement!
You should zoomin more i think, difficult to see all the face expression.

Keep up with the good work !D

Nicola:

Nice movements but the only thing that stands out is that his left foot doesnt move at all in the scene. Great lip sync though.