the idiota
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Alonso Soriano:
good job limiting to a few acting beats. And the motions work well with each individual acting beat. But all together it doesn't hold up as a unified performance. The beats don't feel related, happy sad angry, just kind of bouncing from thought to thought instead of building.
Andrew:
acting is good except leading up to the idiota part. would expect a different pose there. also lip sync needs work
ryan Sowiak:
man I love this guys energy!
Marco:
Nice movements and expressions dude! At the end needed more work for lipsync and timing but anyway...
Matt Hirengen:
very inventive poses
Jose Manuel Gabin:
The expression is great, but stays a little bit static in some poses.
Rachel G.:
I really like the inclusion of eyebrow movements on this one. It gives the face a bit more life. You maintained your eyeline very well, and maybe next time you could insert a second character, because I'm really curious what their reactions were to character 1!
Kensaba:
I liked it! Good luck
Kevin Scott:
nice hand posing!
Lord Ryan Santos:
I think towards the end you have to many hand gestures. You should take out the pounding fists.
David Higgins:
The hands/arms are offset by the ame amount and in the same order every move. It would have been better to change it up a bit.
Blaine Toderian:
Some of his movements seem a little abrupt, and in his 'todas' pose his wrist seems a little too bent.
Andrew Harding:
Could do with a little less twinning with the hands, primarily towards the end, after frame 181.
Thomas Dumont:
Really nice but some changements seem a little bit too abrupt. Nice lypsync...
Ashley Stringer:
nice work, i really like the pose on todas! well done.
Anthony Travieso:
This is looking great. The lipsync feels a bit off after the second cada cosa. Also at the end when he moves up his body stops. I would keep it moving a little bit.
Mark Persson:
He he he... funny! Original character! Love it! He feels alive!
Good body language, good face expression. Good lipsync.
You can sharpen most of it, specially the lipsync. And you could make more variation with the hands in the end of the anim.
Keep up with the good work!
Matt Kelly:
nice.. polish this up
David Shum:
Some very exaggerated poses here!
You know what you need to do? Exaggerate the breakdowns! If only you had a couple more break downs for that nice sweep on frame 155-164.... and also offset the wrist and fore arms, so that they arrive to that pose with a snap.... it would make your extreme poses look that much better!
Ivan:
only the last part, but over all its good
Michael Carter:
great arcs and I love how you tied the beginning and end facial poses...the lip syncing was a little off...
Avner Engel:
Good work on the attitude!
Candace Giancanelli:
nice! The facial animation seems to be off
Rómulo Lazarde:
english
rob eddy:
really like the poses on this and the final pose he holds. i like the big 'TODAS' moment but if you look at frame 169 to me his eyes dont match what he sounds like in the audio. he sounds more serious, maybe even angry. in 169 his eyes make him look a little scared









Animator: Eduardo Cavalcante Komaba
Description: at this one i try to study more gestures and body language =]
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thanks for watching!
Experience: 10 months
Time taken: 1 week