Paul Fuller:

I think the motion looks pretty good overall, but the timing needs work. The part I think needs the most work is where he swings his arm and hits the vase.

Juan Calderon:

the layout needs a little work, the characters performance is almost there, maybe have him walk around a little. his lip sync is a little off, I know the sound clip was tough this month. b ut your getting there. Your performance is almost getting there, so keep at it

Blaine Toderian:

This animation opens out quite strongly! By the end, it seems as if the character has lost too much steam. Adding a more extreme anticipation and plusing the pose for 'todas!' will really add some energy.

Mark Persson:

Nice work! The character feels alive...

Alonso Soriano:

feels a little monotonous, talking headish, when he's just looking straight at us talking.

Rex Lai:

I liked your animation, however, although I know what you were going for towards the end, I didn't feel that it balanced out the scene because the beginning was so great.

Paul Naas:

Nice restraint in not having him gesture wildly the whole time. It took me a while to decide who he was talking to, as his focus is in at least three different places throughout the clip. Lip synch is awesome and, again, I like the restraint. The vase slap was a bit contrived, but aside from that and the focus thing, it's a very nice job.

douglas anderson:

very nice job on the lip sync, it works very well and I love the squash and stretch on the mouth.

Rachel G.:

I really like the passion and the anger in the movements. It adds to the vocal performance and the two match well.

Jonay O. Urbina:

i really like how he stands up

Ashley Stringer:

i love the emotion you have put across in the character, and the interaction with the scene.

well done

David Higgins:

Could have been framed better but I liked the feel of the animation

Matt Kelly:

dont point at the camera.... ever
i really like the beginning (the soft hand hit and the harder hand hit) but i think the move where he hits the cup could be alot stronger

David Thomson:

Its really good really nice poses. I think that when he hits the vase it look like the action is way to light, he needed to put much more force into it and maybe react to it if it was and accident, though he would also react to hitting it if he meant to do that.

David Shum:

everything is so good!
I just wish you REALLY pushed your poses.

Like that sweep you had him do.... If you antic-ed that arm ALL the way screen left, and really put his body, chest and shoulders into it-- It'll be so much more powerful. That would showcase his anger that much more!

Michael Carter:

the animation in the face is well done, but the body language is off at points...

Ryan Chan:

Nice and subtle and great job with the lipsync. I would just turn down the dialog mouth shapes just a little bit so it's not as chattery. Looking good though.

Richard Clark:

Great work.
I think there should be more effort from the body(bigger move) when he swats the jar out the way. the arm almost looks like it's acting independently from the body (frame121 - 140)

Igor Medovshikov:

I like it!

Salvador García Luque:

he needs more gestures, and sometimes is very explosive in his moves and they don't feel natural

Tim W:

Very strong lip sync!!

rob eddy:

good stuff. maybe have the body react more during the big 'TODAS'

Ryoku Weil:

I love the way the table vibrates when he smashes it, great work. Tho when the object is thrown away it lacks of correct physics.

Nicola:

Really nice movement and lip sync. Maybe a little more expression in the eyebrows? Cool.