Cada Cosa

Final Rating: 2.71. Finished: 72 out of 82 entries.
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Animator: Shakaib Feroz

Description: This is my first serious attempt at character animation. This guy is shouting at his lawyer for presenting his friend's case weakly in the court. I hope you guys like it.

Experience: 1 year learning (on and off)

Time taken: Around 15 days

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Blaine Toderian:

You can loosen up the poses and motion in the body, and perhaps think about reducing the number of acting gestures to just the Most Important ones.

David Higgins:

The reflective table was somewhat offputting

Ashley Stringer:

it seems to much like pose to pose you need to add more inbetweens in there to smooth it out.

Nicola:

Looking good. The lip sync is a tad out and some of the poses are a little stiff.

Andrew:

movement too stiff. lip sync needs work

Alonso Soriano:

really stiff, he's a living breathing character, try animating his root bone naturally (looks like you didn't touch it here)

Mark Persson:

Good start! You have created the basic keys, It need more work though!

Keep up with good work!

Tristan Prior:

Pretty good, I would spend some time working on some moving holds and make sure the hands and fingers are animated.

rob eddy:

get those eyebrows involved, will add a lot

Yuriko:

Good progress!
Main problems are: too many leaps in motion paths - work on arcs, and try to work on poses, try to make them more believable (studying of references could help).

keep animating!