Cada Cosa
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Blaine Toderian:
You can loosen up the poses and motion in the body, and perhaps think about reducing the number of acting gestures to just the Most Important ones.
David Higgins:
The reflective table was somewhat offputting
Ashley Stringer:
it seems to much like pose to pose you need to add more inbetweens in there to smooth it out.
Nicola:
Looking good. The lip sync is a tad out and some of the poses are a little stiff.
Andrew:
movement too stiff. lip sync needs work
Alonso Soriano:
really stiff, he's a living breathing character, try animating his root bone naturally (looks like you didn't touch it here)
Mark Persson:
Good start! You have created the basic keys, It need more work though!
Keep up with good work!
Tristan Prior:
Pretty good, I would spend some time working on some moving holds and make sure the hands and fingers are animated.
rob eddy:
get those eyebrows involved, will add a lot
Yuriko:
Good progress!
Main problems are: too many leaps in motion paths - work on arcs, and try to work on poses, try to make them more believable (studying of references could help).
keep animating!









Animator: Shakaib Feroz
Description: This is my first serious attempt at character animation. This guy is shouting at his lawyer for presenting his friend's case weakly in the court. I hope you guys like it.
Experience: 1 year learning (on and off)
Time taken: Around 15 days