Juan Calderon:

lol, hahahaha, ok you made me laugh, Ill telly ou why, cause of the girl, and the characters look purty good, you must of worked quite hard to come up witht he characters, I also think you have a great contrast between the characters, I think thats why it was funny. I was almost afraid this was going to go on the sexual side, cause they might not like that here, but ZI guess it's ok. I like 2D it is very impressive when people work on 2D . But you still need work on your performance, work on Accents, work on the inbetween poses a little more, because as of right now the characters seem a little static.

Blaine Toderian:

Very ambitious! It feels like the main character is being over-dramatic throughout the scene.

rob eddy:

need to show weight more when he jumps up onto the desk and then again off the desk. on the jump down think his legs get into the bent position too soon, they'd be straight until the desk pushed them and made them bent

Martin Silfvast:

Feels very linear and the character lacks weight

Ashley Stringer:

great work i really like the style of the characters and the forcefulness of the male character and he throws the paper away.

well done

Mark Persson:

Very nice idea! Original idea!

You should but more power on the characters!

KISHORE:

when he jumped on to the table and some other bits ate little floty

Johnne Tyson:

Try adding shapes to the head for those extreme words like TODAS! and Idiota. More SandS. Flash is fun but you have to really use it to make it look good.

Andrew:

movements are too linear

Alonso Soriano:

feels very stiff, looks like you're doing limited flash animation, in which case the poses need to be REALLY dynamic to carry between. The fluttering paper is distracting

Ryan Chan:

what happened to the audio?

Andrew Harding:

Interesting approach to the animation, appealing character designs. You just need to work on the poses and the transitions between them a bit more. The movement could be a bit more fluid and have better continuity. Keep up the good work, would really love to see you take this one further.

Eric Huelin:

Note to self:
Left leg doesn't bend to edge of desk.
When he kneels his tail doesn't transition well.

Fernando Porcel:

Nice approach to the subject.
Think you need to planning a bit more the poses of the character. The movment is a bit stif, and the character need more weight ( for example when he fall to seat on the desk) Onky a comment. :) Cheers!

Ryoku Weil:

Heh, nice to see some fur action around. THO...
it lacks of physics, when the main character jumps up the desk it seems he's floating, AND rendering your background just doesn't help at all, it makes it static while a real desk would have moved in some way or at least the stuff on it.