Me cree idiota?

Final Rating: 2.91. Finished: 68 out of 82 entries.
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Animator: Jesus Sandi

Description: A man defends the guilt of another in a judgment.

Experience: 3 months

Time taken: 2 days

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Andrew:

acting needs some work. lower half of his body needs to be animated

Nick Malutama:

I wished the character moved a little bit more but the poses are good

David Thomson:

really nice. when he opens his arms it seem to be a little sluggish

Juan Calderon:

good effort, good environment, but the performance on the character needs work, his emotion isn't coming out and how he feels about the whole trial doesn't really come out

Blaine Toderian:

You've got some great, natural poses. Try holding them longer. This will force you to make the motions quicker, (it feels as if he is under water right now.)

Matt Hirengen:

good, but a little floaty

Martin Silfvast:

Since all the movements are very small in your animation the 'Todas' move, which is big and slow feels out of place. It think a small and fast action would maybe fit nicer.

Kensaba:

Too slow, like slow motion. Keep going

Augusto Goicoechea:

I like it, I think it needs more poses!

Mark Persson:

Good, but needs more work though!

rob eddy:

good stuff, could really use movement from left to right. frames 20-22 have a slight move to the right in the body, but that's about it for piece. when he does big arm gesture at 144 his body would move a little, currently looks fixed in place. moves backward some but looks held in place on both sides

Mark Wheeler:

Some nice hand and finger motions and gestures. Knees and feet placement make the character feel more submissive. Wider stance with one foot rotated slightly more may help.

Dane Winn:

the poses are very floaty and go from one pose to the next very slowly, try and very the timings throughout the shot, it will make the character more appealing, maybe also reconsider the camera position

Ashley Stringer:

try and make the todas! pose a little stronger.

other then that good work well done.

Alonso Soriano:

loosen up, the lower body is really not considered, I don't feel the balance, or the sense of muscles keeping him upright or readjusting to maintain balance. Also you should zoom in to a medium closeup if the legs aren't going to be telling us anything.

Ivan:

his to smooth, i cant see his angry at all

Ryan Chan:

Very nice smooth animation. My suggestions though are: 1) bring in the camera just a tad bit more so we can better see your nice animation... maybe even a medium shot. And 2) His posture looks a little weak when his voice implies a person that is more dominate. This to me is read mostly in the legs. If you did something with the silhouette of the legs to make it seem less weak, i think it would fit better with the character. Or maybe just straightening up his back. Hope this makes sense. Looking great otherwise.

Richard Clark:

the guys movements are feeling floaty. It seems like the poses are not clearly defined either.

Alex Jansen:

Needs qicker movements...and his hip never moves after he takes his first step (shift weight and such)

Dave Blanchette:

Make some poses with the body.

Ahmed Hosni:

this shot need more sharp movement...


good luck

Salvador García Luque:

not much animation

Tristan Prior:

Hey, pretty good. Would liked to have seen a bit more force on the "dolas" part.

Andy Bewernick:

Might work on your rendering and video compression.