David Thomson:

Im not sure about the staging and the monkey seems more of a distraction, it doesnt add anything to the short.

Paul Naas:

It's a bit floaty, and could have done with some tightening up.

ryan Sowiak:

Im glad you added the subtitles.... it really cleared up the story for me haha!

Chris Sullivan:

Thank you for the subtitles.

Ashley Stringer:

very nicely animated well done.

Jurriaan Hos:

try breaking up the movements more.

Thomas Dumont:

It's a bit feeble but you are on the right way

Carlos Fins:

creepy

Matt Kelly:

unnecessary and large camera move that doesnt feel right.. the gag is kinda cliche and the animation of the main character doesnt show any real emotion

Andrew:

monkey seems unnecessary. should spend more time fine tuning the main character

Alonso Soriano:

he's very still, the rest of his body should be helping to communicate the emotion. Also I don't see the purpose of standing up for him, he doesn't get closer to the listener or anything, so it feels like he stood up just to stand up.

Mark Persson:

Original with you own characters, nice to see that!
It needs more work! To begin with everything is to slow, characters movement, lipsync and face expression!

Actually.. i would like to see more face expression. Show more what he is "thinking"! Show more whats going on in his brain; desire, anger, love ..etc !)

Keep up with the good work!

Dave Blanchette:

Could use more contrast in poses, and a little floaty; try hitting some of them harder to emphasize dialogue.

Salvador García Luque:

the guy barely moves, the lipsync is not god and the gestures are very unexpresive.

Andrew Harding:

I'd work on your staging as well as camera movement. The little guy in the hockey mask seems to be acting as a distraction from the main character in my opinion, and the zoom out also confuses as to where my attention should be focused. The main character's poses aren't too much or too close, though, and that's good, he isn't all over the place.

rob eddy:

that little dude to the left is so intriguing i watched him the whole time once he was on screen. maybe introduce him later so not to steal away attention from main guy

Andy Bewernick:

Good, but just doesn't look all that fluid. It's like your timing for the motions were not effectively used. The motion just doesn't look realistic enough.