Carlos Chavez:

unnecesary cut...you're crossing the line.

David Thomson:

looks great. The cuts seems a little sharp, it doesent work that well.

Blaine Toderian:

I think that some of his actions need to be snappier and quicker; it feels like he is underwater. The camera cut seems to cross the line of action in the scene, perhaps a close up of the character would be better?

Hernán Bruna:

Too much actions happening at the same momment! keep it simple! but quite funny :P!

Jeff Simon:

nice render

Paul Naas:

There's an awful lot going on, and some of your main character's actions are obscured by the guy he's talking to. Makes it kind of hard to follow.

douglas anderson:

I wouldn't move the camera on a major dialogue accent. But the movement and lip sync is good.

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

wow 4 characters. I don't know if it's how the audio and video were put together or something else but it seems like the main characters lip sync and body movements are late. Particularly when he says Todas! Well done though.

Rachel G.:

The animation is great, just watch yourself with the camera angles. When you jumped to that second angle, it felt like you crossed the axis point, and it was a bit disorienting. Very fun story, though.

Jonay O. Urbina:

the camera change is confusing to me

Martin Silfvast:

the arm movements during 'cada cosa cada cosa' seems a bit loose

Salvador García Luque:

Great animation. the primary and the secondary animation is very good. but the camera changes are odd. Specially when he says "todas", you visually put one character in the location of the other one and is very distractive,

David Higgins:

Predictable but not sure what the result has to do with the dialogue.

KISHORE:

too much going on

rob eddy:

i love the guy escaping. body hitting the ground feels heavy, nice job. i think main character's arms feel a little floaty, like he's calmly conducting an orchestra instead of scolding another guy into oncoming traffic

Lauren Andersson:

haha!

Lavendra Love:

Great work but editing cut not proper; last action is appreciable

Ken Rice:

pretty good, but the camera 'crossed the line'.

Johnne Tyson:

You main character is still a little floaty. Don't even notice the prisoner character until the third shot. Very close to breaking the 180 rule. It's too jarring with that cut.

Ashley Stringer:

:), this one made me smile so much, nice work on the idea for the scene its really worked well.

well done.

David Shum:

Nice renders :D
And you have some nice animation on the orange-hair guy.

But i'm not sure I got the point of the sequence. I know it was meant to be funny,...
But I think i felt more confused, than amused after watching your sequence.

Alonso Soriano:

I love the way he verbally pushes that guy back. Not sure why you have so many characters on screen. Not sure I agree with the acting beat for "think I'm an idiot?!"

Dane Winn:

look at the timing more

Shakaib Feroz:

Secondary action is AWESOME!! Maybe you could exaggerate the main action a bit more.Love the ending!

Fernando Porcel:

Nice animation.

I think the most important operative word on the dialog is "TODAS!" , and you , in this crucial word, changes the point of view of the camera, in the same instant of the "TODAS!" pronunciation. That break the essence of the dialog, and confuse a bit. Only a comment : ) Good work. Cheers!!

Juan Calderon:

hmmm. you did to much. good effort, but I think you added to many models and to many characters, that hurt the performance of the character that speaks out the lines. company will usually notice a character thats great acting and how he delivers his words, they wont care if you have a lot of models or characters, they rather see one great performance then average work. Keep working at it you have in yourself. you'll get there

Eric Huelin:

Aren't there bars on the back windows of the truck? Maybe that was just too much going on at once.
OK! So you are using cartoon physics and getting hit by a rig will send you a 100 feet in the air but it wasn't obvious. I initially said to myself "some guy jumped to his death off the roof?"

ayush raizada:

may be u shud concentrate on one character only, dat will be gud.......

Nicola:

Nice. Alot going on there and works well!