August entry
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Blaine Toderian:
This is coming along very well; the body feels a little stiff and planted into one place at times. It also seems like his arms and legs are independent from his body.
Mark Persson:
Nice work, but needs more work!
Sean Thorpe:
hands...hands
Rachel G.:
Great effort here. I have trouble figuring out where the eyeline is, what he is looking at in particular. It seems to jump around a bit. Good job with the lipsynching.
Salvador García Luque:
Tha character seldom moves but when he does he goes extremly fast from pose to pose
Martin Silfvast:
looks stiff and linear.
Ali Tezel:
Good stuff man. You can definitely place the camera closer to the character and frame him better in my opinion.
Ashley Stringer:
its a good start, but it looks very pose to pose, if it was smoothed out it would looks much much better.
well done
Nicola:
I think you have some nice poses there but the hands seem a little stiff.
Jonay O. Urbina:
the audio and the video are not sync and I would exaggerate more the face
Alonso Soriano:
use more of the whole body, not just the hands and arms
Vedanth Rajan:
the hands seems to be twinning between frames 170- 190
Andrew Harding:
I'd restrain the character a bit more, some of his movement, especially at the end, is out of place, too exaggerated (post frame 213). On frame 124, his right arm seems to hit an invisible wall in terms of movement - work some more overlap into the animation.
Henning Koczy:
The hands are stiff, like paddles.
rob eddy:
very nice, move the body throughout the clip, right now it locks into place after each move









Animator: Jonay O. Urbina
Description: after three weeks here is my first 3D animation. I'll appreciate all feedback
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: three weeks