Brad Bradbury:

why does he fall down?

Juan Calderon:

a suggestion work on a layout and storyboard before you animate, it gives you and idea of how the character will act, also try and reherse the characters personality and try to sketch his face out, it can be stick figures

Blaine Toderian:

You hit some the poses really nicely; I think that you need to include more holds though; he never stops moving. At the end, he is falling down because his chair has moved, yes? I think this could be clearer; some sort of anticipation of his intention, and perhaps a surprised expression as he falls.

Fernando Porcel:

Really nice body lenguage and good expresions. Good work! Cheers.

Matt Hirengen:

the fall needs way more anticipation.

rob eddy:

looks good. maybe set up that fall a little better, have him already backed away from the table and preparing to sit before he delivers the 'idiota'. right now his motion to sit is really sudden.

Paul Naas:

Different approach from that of a lot of others this month. Makes it much more appealing in comparison. Good work!

Yuriko:

Smooth.I like it!

Mark Persson:

Good but still need more work! Good lipsync!

Why should the character fall in the end? It just make him stupid!!?

Ashley Stringer:

this has great emotion in it, one day i hope i could come out with something like this.

well done

Matt Kelly:

todas feels week.. the rest is pretty nice.. the fall back is unnecessary , cliche and out of character.. not really holding poses

Alonso Soriano:

a little busy, and a little monotonous. I think it would have been stronger to have worked for a longer while in the pose at 173, just so it's not all straight on torso.
I think you need more drag on the hands during the fall, but good set up on the fall.

Jonay O. Urbina:

I think during the last bit ("que se cree que soy idiota") thare is too much going on with the arms. But I like it.

Michael Carter:

I would have left the falling down part out...

Alex Jansen:

Why does he fall over? I think it could do without the attempt at comedy

Yasmin:

Good humor element

Chase Shields:

I love the animation!
I don't have anything bad to say about it.

Why does he fall in the end? Is it a trip? If it is make sure you show that he tries to sit down before he falls.

Great job!

Salvador García Luque:

This one is very good, the poses are very fluid, but I think they need more gesture expressions. And also there is no anticipation for the moment he sits

Joel D:

A fall, just for the sake of falling.
I've seen it too much already.

Matt Johnson:

some good poses and arcs.
I think the ending of him falling could have been left out. I would also say to try to work within a pose - you have a lot of changes going on.
Overall its good, but a little more polishing could make this piece really good.