Mark Persson:

Nice work, but needs more work though...

Keep up with the good work!

rob eddy:

i like the subtle acting, for 'todas' he might need to be a little more exaggerated though to match the audio

Alonso Soriano:

it feels like you're afraid to move him around, It's fine to have a still performance but it should feel like that's what the character chooses. Everything's pretty stiff, especially the torso. Arms feel twinned.

Ashley Stringer:

you really managed to but the emotion through the scene, it did seem a little pose to pose, try and smooth it out and it will look much better

well done

KISHORE:

i love the poses

Nicola:

I like the expression on this. However, he seems a little bit rigis in his torso. Perhaps adding added expression by bending the spine a little?

Matt Kelly:

lose the camera move.. keep it where it was at the end and show a little motion in the near characters..

David Thomson:

The camera move is really disconcerting at first i thought that the main character was floating.

Alex Jansen:

The camera dolly is very distracting, and all we find out is that he is talking to someone else...I would take the other two characters out and just focus on the main characters actions

Tristan Prior:

Nice, I like the more subtle approach to this shot.

Jorge Zagatto:

I liked the final pose!!