Juan Calderon:

good effort.
Suggestion don't have the camera move it, right now the camera gives a suggetion of a third person, have the camera be still. as for the animation, good effort, but you need to improve on the characters performance a little more

Matt Hirengen:

the timing's a bit too even. I like your acting choices, but the timing makes the key poses float from one to the other. maybe add some holds and snappier movements

Jeff Simon:

lips need a little work

Rachel G.:

I really like the camera movement, but I feel like the secondary character needs to react more off the primary character. I like when the two make contact and the way they react to one another, because that feels very organic.

Eric:

Layout was good, providing enough staging, the main character movement was decent, like how he leaned intothe pillar. The Lip sync seemed very off, and the hands were pretty stiff.

Jonay O. Urbina:

maybe the lip synch needs a bit more work

Martin Silfvast:

The flickering background shadows were very distracting, adjust your render settings.
The bright orange character starts off good but the it seems like he goes in to slow motion.

Salvador García Luque:

The textures and the camera movement are great. The character animation is very good, just one thing, the characters seem to be stupid 'cause his mouth stays open almost all the time.ha and the lipsync needs work.

Andrew:

lip sync is lacking. takes focus away from the decent quality animation

Shakaib Feroz:

Timing at the starting and the end is very good. But the middle part (from 30 to 180) is going very slow and looks rather lifeless.. Looks like you left the enter inbetweening process to be calculated by the computer.
The white guy has very little movement. He should be reacting somehow to the red guy's blabbering.

Curtis:

The camera move is very distracting.

rob eddy:

nice, i think would feel better if camera wasnt moving. orange guy seems to lose the lip sync toward the end. guy who is getting pushed could have reaction in the eyes, brows, maybe eyes blink closed while he's being shoved

Mark Persson:

Funny character you have there! Why orange color on him? Is he the bad guy?

The light and the camera are perfect, but you need to work more with the character movement and lipsync!

Ashley Stringer:

nice work, well done

Matt Kelly:

dont render unfinished animation
unnecessary camera move.. work on lipsync

David Thomson:

Whys he got the guy around the throat in the beginining, and then he wipes his ass on the column? nice work though.

Barnabas Boehler:

The motions feel a bit slow and floaty...especially for such fast and punchy dialogue

Mark Wheeler:

When his butt hits the pole his hips should have no slow into that lean pose. Having his hips slow against the pole take away the weight of the character.

Yasmin:

the moving camera is a bit distraction; good effort though.