Brad Bradbury:

CArful broken wrists in 183

Fernando Porcel:

Cool approach to the dialog.
Perhaps on the finish you need to put a shame expression on the man after the tie cut, only a comment. Cheers!

Matt Hirengen:

the tie cut doesn't read very well

rob eddy:

first point of the knife still looks off

Alonso Soriano:

left hand fingers are not natural, the part where he talks to us is confusing (around 99) because the rest feels like he's yelling at his tv (which I think is good) The tie doesn't feel right because he's confident enough in the knife to point to himself with it. The left hand really distracts, it would be a much stronger piece if it gets more consideration.

Paul Naas:

It'd really drive the point home (so to speak...) if he noticed at the end that he's cut his tie off after he finished asking if they thought he was an idiot. Accents were very similar to what a LOT of others did, but your scenario makes them work much better.

Rachel G.:

This one has a really unique story, and I love the use of the sound effect to emphasize the "idiota." There is a lot going on in this one, and I think the character is well-used.

Martin Silfvast:

Very nice staging. The animation seems very blocky and jagged.

Spencer Barber:

You had very good hand positions so it didn't look like a robot, and the tie movement was awesome

Mark Persson:

Love it! nice character! Original!

But the face expression and the lipsync needs more work!

Johnne Tyson:

Fun. Like the way you integrated that rustle sound effect into the animation. Still needs some smoothing around the edges. And more facial acting.

Ashley Stringer:

i like it up till 170 cos it seem quite jumpy after that.

well done

David Thomson:

Nice one I was waiting for him to cut something and then his tie comes off, real nice :)

David Shum:

That hand on frame 183 looks really awkward.
You started the shot off really strong, but feels like you ran out of gas!
Clean up the shot, and read all the comments! I think this have potential of becoming a great piece!

Vedanth Rajan:

Character feels a bit stiff

Ryan Chan:

Looking great! I think one area where you can improve your animation is with the arcs in the arms and hands. I feel like there could be more swooping gestures but it looks like the inbetweens for the key frames are fairly linear. There is some arc but i think you can exaggerate it more.

Michael Carter:

I love how he shouts at the tv hahaha...

Alicia Reece:

Thats funny! My grandma gets really into her courtroom shows too! I like the wobble when he moves especially since he's really throwing his weight around.

Juan Calderon:

im surprised he didn't stab himself

Eric Huelin:

Needed to go frame by frame to understand how his tie got chopped off otherwise, nice!

Arief Leuvenardi:

His fingers on his left hand looks weird but the other stuff looks good.

Salvador García Luque:

excellent animation, but some poses occur in a very short time, so I can´t appreciete them well. And also make feel the animation chunky.

Mark Wheeler:

After he leans back away from the TV, his left hand snaps up too quickly. Careful of odd hand poses (the right hand when he cuts off his tie).