El Abogado
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Nick Malutama:
Really really good!
Blaine Toderian:
I found this pretty funny! You've got natural poses; they could be plussed and polished a bit further; move him around so he's not rooted in place. It's good to see pupil animation, but reduce (or remove,) the alternating pattern of dilation though; it looks like he's on an acid trip in some sections. :)
Matt Hirengen:
nice job.
Hernán Bruna:
Cool expressions!
Kensaba:
Avoid twinning on hands.
Jonay O. Urbina:
i think that the sound goes a bit earlier than the image. but i like it
Salvador García Luque:
Tha character doesn't act like the voice does, which is vigorous but slow
Manjoe Chan:
some very nice dynamic poses not too exaggerated. not too sure about the pupil dilation tho. it's kind of distracting.
Corey McDaniel:
Hits all the accents nicely. Good job
Andrew:
curves could use smoothing. not bad though
David Higgins:
I found the forground object very distracting - in fact I found it more interesting than the character - why was it there - it's not like the character interacted with it. The animation wasn't too bad.
rob eddy:
like it, good variety of posses in the face, alternating of dilating pupils in 137-152 is a little distracting though
Ashley Stringer:
really nice touch with making the pupils bigger and smaller, well done
Nicola:
Really nice and smooth. The only thing I can reallly pick at is that his left arm seems a little motionless at the beginning.
Matt Kelly:
whats with the crazy eyes?
Ian Jacobson:
What is that in the left hand corner of the shot?!
Ivan:
i cant realy understand the movement
Alonso Soriano:
having a psychotic episode? the pupils and fidgety hand movements make me think it
turning from addressing us to addressing the side is confusing
Daria Rybakova:
excellent eyes! :)
Dane Winn:
very gd
Martin Silfvast:
On frame 140 it looks likes his pupils are pulsing, looks a bit odd.
Sunny Kharbanda:
Pretty good work on the upper body. I think the spine and hips could be pushed a bit more, to get more natural lines of action in some poses.









Animator: DanieleScali
Description: .....
Experience: 2 years traditional animation
Time taken: 4 days