Eric Huang:

Great poses. What takes away from it is the jerky motions and the transitions from each pose. I also feel that the animation is a little too snappy for the feel of this clip.

Chris Welsby:

i think there are way to many poses in this piece. With this kind of audio holding poses really convey a stronger sense of the emotion

Philip Crow:

Some parts are still rough, like the fall at the end, with his feet. The beginning lip synch seems off too.

Tyler Phillips:

It seems like every movement is really extreme and it would be nice to see some subtle acting in contrast. Nice monkey.

Cole Higgins:

overeacting. its like a bad actor. good try though

Aaron Clement:

I like the ending. Things feel as though there moving a little too much, though.

David Humphreys:

Try to spend some more time on your blocking and keep your pose count down, it looks like youve tried to cram lots in here and its good but it would benefit from being alot simpler.

Ezra Allen:

Lots of work gone into this one by the looks of it. Very dramatic! which I liked for its OTT appeal, On the animation side, it doesnt really flow because there is so much going on. The lip synch needs a lot of work, this was a tough one on the lip synch because she talks so fast.

garvey harris:

such a great performance was let down by missing the opportunity for a big finish but great acting

Dan Dulberger:

Pretty shaky motion (Too much coffee?) but otherwise start looks ok. At the end hands and feet would go through the floor if there was one.

Jarred de Beer:

Nice acting, i like his movement. I don't think he should have turned away from the camera though. Try use his eyes a bit more

Aparajitha Vaasudev:

the acting is too extreme for the dialogue... it sounds like it's not coming from the character, like he's mocking the voice or something...

Simon Bean:

Poses a little too hammy for me, doesn't seem to suit the audio

Mike Courtney:

The first part of the animation looks like it is being played at a faster frame rate than it should be. It's feet go through the floor when it comes to a kneeling position.

Renzo Biffa E.:

"she" is not seem to be sad.

Max Herzfeld:

There're lots of good poses and motions but it looks jumpy and fast.

Some simpification could make this easier to follow.

good work,
Max

Felix:

funny animation :) ... needs a bit more dynamic. won't be amess to give more expression to the hands.

Taber Dunipace:

Ack! The feet don't bend at the end! The acting is all over the place in this piece and the animation needs much better principals. Good effort on this one.

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort!

Alexis St-Laurent:

Watch out for the wiggle in the movements

Gregory Marlow:

Wow. Very good poses but the whole animation feels twitchy. I think if you could get those twitches out I would rate this one pretty high.

Jeranimo:

Looks like the poor monkey's gonna die! Turn off volume then see your animation. You'll figure out what I'm saying. heheh..

Alonso Soriano:

I like that she's making big pose changes, but you can't fit so many into this dialogue and have it work

Victor Wong:

There's a weight problem when the monkey gets down on her knees; remember that the toes of the feet won't be static.

Robert Tighe:

I love monkey animation! The synch feels quite off though.

Srikanth:

Needed to be polished more

Andy van Straten:

too dramatic!! audio timing doesnt allow for this much action

Sean Graham:

Monkey! Always love seeing a monkey get all emotional. Seems the lipsynch's off some. There's a lot of jitter and pop, make sure to check your tangents and get some smoothing in there.