Eric Huang:

I like how reserved the poses are. However I think it's lacking in facial expressions.. I really think you can push them a lot :)!

Chris Welsby:

some nice poses in here. i think some work on the curves to smooth some of the movement out would help a lot

David Ruzicka:

I like how you didn't go crazy with movement, but the sniff is jerky and the arm at the end coming up needs some work.

Tyler Phillips:

The lip sync seemed a little strange, but nice subtle acting.

Cole Higgins:

little too jerky. not really hitting clear poses.

Aaron Clement:

Nice, I like your acting and setting/staging choice...that's creative... good job... you've worked within the pose... good job there, too.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

The animation has some jerks. Also the lipsync needs work. You need to go with the clip, listen to the accents and the pauses.

garvey harris:

i couldn't feel the emotion in this through facial or body gestures - when I used to go to acting classes a suggestion I made that made a lot of sense was that if you were on a bus or a in car and passing by and saw the character acting out the part, without hearing what was being said, how much of the expression and body language tells you what is going on?

I think the key here is resisting, and accusing the other character that they also had a moment of weakness, so far I'm not seeing that being expressed enough

Ezra Allen:

theres some glitches there on the right arm, the sniff is a bit too sharp too the way the shoulders raise. Are you using stepped keys or something? you need to work a bit more on the clean up.

Simon Bean:

Love the subtle acting. Really well done. My only crit is the lipsync around the middle section doesn't really hold up. The eyebrows before "resist" are un-natural. The sniff is a bit OTT. Hope this helps:) Well done

Florent Perrin:

acting is a little bit "empty". Perhaps you should plan more before animating. "What do I want to say"....

Mike Courtney:

Nice start. I noticed some popping on the hands and on the right arm. The lips seem a bit off at "resist it".

Max Herzfeld:

It looks like you gave lots of good attention to the face, but whenever the body moves it jumps. Smooth out the body movements and you'll be golden.

good job,
Max

Taber Dunipace:

Not too bad. I like the acting choices generally, but there isn't a lot going on for me to look at here. Keep working at it and don't forget the principals.

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort!

Gregory Marlow:

alright. kinda dull

Victor Wong:

There's a jump happening with the right hand around the time of the sob. There's also some question about the weight in the arms. Lip sync and facial expressions are good.

Curtis Hunt:

nice feel to it. great face and pose. check that lip sync. started okay but got off track.

Christiaan Moleman:

The character seems a bit too still, perhaps. You could do bit more with pushing against the door and leaning forward to accent parts in a subtle way. Given the stillness, the shrug on the *sniff* seems unnaturally big. I would tone that down.

Sean Graham:

This just needs some smoothing and polish.