Micah Betts:

Good keys and smooth transitions, but I think the character could appear more desperate, she seems pretty calm

Tyler Phillips:

I think this could use some "holds". There is constant movement without texture. Other than that, it looks good and I'm sure your next animation will look even better.

Chris Welsby:

the animation is very nice. but i dont think the actin choices really fit the audio. if you watch it without sound you would guess she is very sad. nice aniamtion tho!

David Humphreys:

Alot of twinning going on here, and considering your angle youve made it hard for yourself to get any dynamic poses.

a good hold pose on the "but" around frame 204 and a nice sense of weight there.

Cole Higgins:

not really sure what emotions this character is thinking. Think she needs to be animated from the inside out not the outside in.

Michael Li:

I like the facial expressions on this simple rig. And the natural motion of the walks. I'm just not sure why she is walking around in this scene like that.

Aaron Clement:

I like your character. A breath of fresh air from the Andy rig... everyone seems to be using that rig... I don't blame them, it is a good rig... Anyway, I love the walk off at the end... that's really nice. Watch the twinning at the first section. Overall, a strong ending.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice, the lighting and camera set doesn't help too much.

Ezra Allen:

Ok my clip....too many hand positions, some Ik glitching going on there mostly on the arms but also on the legs...and whats with the crazy hat????

garvey harris:

too hesitant, acting could've been and should've been stronger, but nice

Jeranimo:

Good work. Though, I don't like the camera angle. It almost looks like you're using the front camera. And who is she talking to? The camera man? Also, avoid twinning everything. Right now, everything looks too symmetrical. Good effort though.

Shahbaaz Shah:

I think the poses could be punched up a bit to sell the emotion better. But great effort.

Simon Bean:

Lovely stuff. Very smooth. Perhaps rethink your camera to punctuate the emotion. Great Effort!

Mike Courtney:

The lip-sync pops in places.

Andrew Stovesand:

Cool

Felix:

nice. but starting at the rigging position makes it really unattractive.... animation is too static

Taber Dunipace:

This reads like a stage actor doing an exercise rather than a real character with real emotions. The animation is fair, but the acting choices are weaker.

Phillip Moon:

Nice work and good contact with the "other" in the scene.

Bilal Ahmad:

good work man!

Virgil Mihailescu:

not bad. I had a little bit the feeling it's acted for an audience, not in a context. but the animation looks good, flows well. could have more weight and contrast.

Gregory Marlow:

not bad animation but the acting seemed to be very staged. Almost like a monologue out of a play. I would try to put it in an understandable context.

Matt Johnson:

Nice job. Feels a little bouncy and not enough pop in parts.

Victor Wong:

Although the body steps forward in sync with the knocks, I don't really get the sense that footsteps were created. Apart from that there was good timing on the gestures and lip sync.

Robert Tighe:

Nice effort. I felt the performance is a bit flat. I would like to see better staging. keep it up!

Daniel Harriman:

The motion in this animation is very good (save for some problems with the girl's balance at the end) Its all very smooth. But I don't think the actions before the sniffle "fit" as well as the slow and deliberate actions at the end. Perhaps she should be more tense at the start? But anyway bravo! Good effort!