C. J. Cow:

prett good acting but it feels abit floaty around "i can do this..." on out love the epart when she tilts her head to one side on "i bet"

Chris Welsby:

nice work

David Ruzicka:

She is dancing.

Tom Law:

Her expressions are great as well as some of the subtlety in the hand gestures.

David Humphreys:

i cant help this but, is she meant to be cross eyed? its very offputting.

you have good fluid motions but its a little bouncy and bubbly for the clip,and she dosent seem to upset to me.

Jonathan Gomez:

I would try to understand more about range of motion of body parts. You are breaking her neck a few times. Usually only done for snappy tex avery stuff.

Kristoffer Clark:

The animation is good, but the choice expression was a bit strange

Micah Betts:

Seems to be a strange mix of happiness/playfulness and sadness, haha...I think it would have been better if the whole thing was done in a mocking sarcastic way. Nice flow in the motions, though.

Cole Higgins:

I like the attitude she has but I dot feel like the dialogue matches the animation. Think more about what she is saying. Good attitude though. Your not affraid to animate something original. Thats great.

Tyler Phillips:

The mechanics of the animation are done well. It could be polished a little further.

Michael Li:

Looks like she's dancing, and that just didn't fit the script I feel. But the animation is funky and fun! I like it, if only she was saying something else.

Aaron Clement:

The body feels as if it's floating from one point to the next... put me off. Use the bouncing ball principle with the pelvis... that should help fix the floating problem you have there. Some good expressive poses that did communicate at times.

Ozgur Yildirim:

This is my entry

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

The animation is too floaty in the middle part, the rest is nice. The poses are too childish for the clip IMHO.

Jamal D. Owens:

Its good, but the extreme movements totally killed it. I love the beginning and end though poses. But, the poses in the middle does not hook up with the whole animation. Good job though.

Dan Dulberger:

Imho the ending is better than the start. She looks like an energetic teen but she jumps around and exaggerates her arm gestures too much for this scene/mood I think. All animation is nice though.

Ezra Allen:

nice smooth animation.Im not too sure about the poses, also there is a strange rythum going on here almost looks like shes doing some kind of dance. I would say the actions were unatural, but the animation is not bad, I think you just need to think about the poses harder.

garvey harris:

powerfully suggestive movements and acting interpretation till the end - when I used to go to acting classes a suggestion I made that made a lot of sense was that if you were on a bus or a in car and passing by and saw the character acting out the part, without hearing what was being said, how much of the expression and body language tells you what is going on?

I think the key here is resisting, and accusing the other character that they also had a moment of weakness, so far I'm not seeing that being expressed enough

Carmelo Leggiero:

a little bit too much floaty, remember that even if we don't see the legs, the weight shift must be believeble. Keep up the good work!

Ricardo Vicens:

There are some appealing poses in your shot, but some felt forced. I would also watch out for twinning in your a lot of your performance. It's ok to do it every once in a while, but I would avoid back to back situations of it.

Vivian Nikolich:

Your facial animation is really excellent. However, the overall body motion is a bit jerky and sudden, and needs to be smoothed out. Also, some of the poses were a bit too exaggerated or strange.

Keep up the good work!

Simon Bean:

Erm, no offense but there's some really odd poses in here. Whats' that first pointy pose about?? You can obviously animate- Secondary motion on hair lovely- last pose gorgeous. Film yourself copying the poses in here exactly and try to make it look natural. Not gonna happen. Nice animation but think about your acting. Hope this helps ;) Great effort

Florent Perrin:

You have a good moment around 205... The rest needs to be planned and calmed down. Keep it up!!

miles southan:

Not bad! The main problem area is that big move around 60 that seems to be split into two motions instead of one fluid motion. Her neck looks a little broken at 96. Get some of that bend with the neck, not just the head. Throughout you could use the neck more.

Mike Courtney:

The hands seem a bit static at the very beginning. At "I don't know" she looks cross-eyed.

Renzo Biffa E.:

the face expression was very good, the same as the lip-sync, but I don’t like the contrast of the hands and body animation with that face expressions.

Eric Kramp:

the movement is really fun to watch, it just doesn't really seem to fit with the emotions, her face and voice say sad, but her body seems to kind of be dancing

Victor Wong:

There's a bit too much twinning happening in the arms. Lip sync is good and timing of the arm gestures is good.

Erik Griott:

this is fun and flowy, the timing is pretty good as well, but to me it feels like she is carelessly explaining something rather than trying to prove to someone what she can do it. i like how she actually has character with some definite poses, but her arms are twinning throughout the whole animation. there is only one place where her hands are one in front of the other. twinning isnt terrible, as long as you add a little overlap and offset. it just makes it a little more interesting to look at.

Taber Dunipace:

Wow, really funny facial expressions but what the heck is she doing? Is she mocking someone? Does she have to go to the bathroom? The first gesture is nice and the last one is nice but in between the weight shifting is just too much! Very nice facial, but I can't concentrate on it.

Bilal Ahmad:

good work man!

Virgil Mihailescu:

you're illustrating stuff, but I don't understand what's going on. it doesn't look like there is any context around her gestures. the animation looks ok (there are some weird expressions on her face though), but anyway, overall, it doesn't make sense.

Alexis St-Laurent:

I like the end. She does too mamy different actions though. It would be better to decide a smaller list of things she does when she talks.

Michael Richard:

she looks quite goofy on some of her postures, for what the audio is depicting.

Gregory Marlow:

alright

Jeranimo:

Learn to avoid twinning! Twinning is not good for your animation, unless you really need it in your shot.

Paulo Clayton:

Definitely a teen character. =) Way to capture the emotional torment of a fourteen-year-old girl! Couple gestures were a bit extreme to me, i.e. right around frames 90-110. Head nod, arms going way out from the body before coming in close for "resist it." Not as natural a gesture to me. Well done otherwise!

Matt Johnson:

Liked the action in the body and the face was working well. Watch the tweening in the hands - really noticeable.

Srikanth:

too many variation in poses man...
indivisual poses look good but in a sequence its too many of them