Eric Huang:

Poses are working, but the motion just feels jerky in the beginning because the back is stiff.

Chris Welsby:

some cool stuff in there. some of the moves with the hips feel very fast tho

David Ruzicka:

113-127 movement needs some work. Mouth opens late.

Hernán Bruna:

Problems with the mouth

Kristoffer Clark:

lip sync was a little off and the timing on the poses need more fine tuning.

Tyler Phillips:

It looks like the audio is out of sync.

Cole Higgins:

shes moving to the highs and lows of the dialogue. I feel like her emotions and movement need to come from the insode. Animate to those insode emotions and you will have some great stuff.

Aaron Clement:

A bit poppy with the movements. Give it more easy in and out. I like her body posture.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice, the movements are a little too jerky. Some poses are too extreme and the lipsync needs work.

David Humphreys:

your "i can resist it" pose on frame 129 needs work it feels very stiff and your movements upto frame 163 go from rapid and erratic to slow and sludgy. if you work more on your blocking you should be able to avoid alot of this. your last pose however is very good, keep it up!

garvey harris:

damn, that was awsome

Ezra Allen:

strange poses here 123 doesnt work for me. On frame 32 she pulls her fists in to her chest, this pose just doesnt fit for me, maybe not the pose but the action is very sharp and strong, and I dont think it fits.

Michael Richard:

I think the audio and video don't sync up on this one. The arm gestures and mouth could be timed better to the audio.

Dan Dulberger:

Pretty fast movements look unnatural for this model (frames 60-65, zip!).

Mike Clark:

your actions are a little late. Try to lead the dialog with your poses.

Florent Perrin:

good choices of poses. But transitions are quite brutal between the differents parts. Perhaps there's no need to systematically match the audio file with a corresponding movement... Think of the way you would play it...

Simon Bean:

Lip sync seems off. Poses are over-complicated- snaps into "do this" way too quick, "give into this" pose seems un-natural to me, 'sniff' is rushed. I really like the end "...I bet you...". Its like you've breathed out and relaxed finally which is what the scene needed. Hope that helps :)Good effort

Mike Courtney:

More contrasting background color please. Audio seems a bit off from animation. Slight jerk in the beginning when curling down. Turn happens too fast and abruptly.

P Walters:

Not too shabby! the beginning movement feels the most rough. On "I can give into this" doesn't feel very natural at all. The last third feels more natural and refined. Pretty nice.

Max Herzfeld:

The delivery seemed off from the dialogue.
Keep the powerful movements up to tempo with your gestures.

I liked the lifting of the hands before she drops them, at the end.

Good job,
Max

Mark Dickie:

Seems like the audio is a little out of sync on this? Nice effort though, your animation shows potential.

Erik Griott:

she feels stiff and linear to me. i think it needs more ease ins and outs. also, i think the finger sniffle is a little contrived. try to think of something more original, or maybe even make her do the finger sniffle a beat after the actual sniff sound, like shes too busy to remember to whipe her nose because shes ranting.

Taber Dunipace:

It's badly unsynchronized for some reason, but moving on from that, I can see that there's a lot of strange gesturing going on here which is distracting me. The animation is also very choppy and rough for some reason.

Gregory Marlow:

not too shabby

Kim Vertner:

Timing was off a bit.

Matt Johnson:

little jerky but decent job.

Victor Wong:

Some of the poses are a bit curious, but the timing works very well overall.

Robert Tighe:

I like the timing. The lip synch feels quite off.
Nice work!

Sean Graham:

Lipsych's off a little here, but overall, the the poses and timing are probably pretty good. Make sure you're checking your tangents, there's a lot of pops and floatiness happening.