Renaud Déchaux:

nice animation, like this scene!

Nathaniel Villanueva:

great face, probably the best facial animation ive seen on this rig soo far. you pushed the eyes well. the arms are really good too, it just gets a little floaty when shes holding up her fists. the emotion is very natural and consistent, and still a bit exaggerated. very well done.

Paul Yan:

Your gestures feel very believable and it doesn't feel like you are going in and out of poses - they are broken up really well. I think the one pose I would disagree with is the sniff. I feel like it's a very cliche way of sniffing and it reads more like smelling her finger rather than wiping away a runny nose. Excellent work!

Kevin Rucker:

I can see your acting choices, but can work on execution more.

Alonso Soriano:

well done. could come a lot closer in with the camera so we can see that face acting. Lipsynch and face look good. Hands and arms are pretty good, but a little bit sharp stops that feel like she's hitting something. Final expression change should be an actual change instead of just dialing down the eyebrows, change their linie of action.

David Ruzicka:

frames 80 and 100 are exactly the same position for hands, one would be better. I think they stop very rapidly without bounce. but besides that very good, I especially love the strand of hair.

Eric Huang:

My own work... yea :X

Tom Law:

Her hand movements when she says "There's always a moment" are excellent man, well done.

Kristoffer Clark:

Good job :) The face was done very well, the only crit really would be the repeating hand gestures.

Tyler Phillips:

I think there could be a little more variation with the hands when she says "I can do this, I can give into this, or I can resist it."

Cole Higgins:

really nice feels great. im sold. sorry no constructive advice. Im tired. Keep going this piece is great.

Aaron Clement:

Good. I don't like the moving of the hands at the beginning. Feels a bit stiff. I like the last half.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice job, I think it lacks some expressiveness and a little bit of attitude change.

garvey harris:

nice acting on teh girl but weak on her suggestion to the other person also having had a moment of weakness - Vwhen I used to go to acting classes a suggestion I made that made a lot of sense was that if you were on a bus or a in car and passing by and saw the character acting out the part, without hearing what was being said, how much of the expression and body language tells you what is going on?

I think the key here is resisting, and accusing the other character that they also had a moment of weakness, so far I'm not seeing that being expressed enough

Ezra Allen:

Like the facial stuff she really looks like shes going to cry. The wrists are looking a bit unatural at times on the left hand. Lipsynch looks good, nice anim.

C. J. Cow:

great effort! but around "i can do this..." when she throws her fists it feels like theyre hitting a invisible wall

Oren Bentov:

Very nice, I like the acting overroll.
in the start the hands look a little off, but after that the movments are really nice, and very subtle.
great job :)

miles southan:

Looks good! Maybe one too many arm poses. I'm not sure about the sniff. The way her finger flies up for it than disappears it feels more like she's sniffing her finger. If anything, she'd sniffle then wipe her nose. The first there's a moment feels a little late. The spacing on her right arm is a little funny around 146- the way it speeds up there.

vinay:

damn good. nice subtle stuff. gr8 job

Jarred de Beer:

I absolutely love the expression in her hand movement on 'there's ALWAYS a moment'. Nice sniff and afterwards mouth shape. The overlapping action of her hair was nice. You did quite well with her eyes too. It would be nice to see much more exaggeration in her facial expressions though, it seems a little flat

Florent Perrin:

Very good job. It's alive, sensitive and you made good choices of acting. On frames 82 and 102, the fists stop in a very arch way. Looks like they hit something, as the third movement they do is well don. Anyway, I credit you with a 7stars, since a like the ambiance you've created there!

Mike Courtney:

The lip-sync isn't there yet. The hands seem to be hitting something when coming away from the girl, i.e. they stop too quickly giving them an unnatural look. Over-extend the stopping point and come back to it (overlap).

Simon Bean:

wow, some really nice stuff here. The lipsync seems to be way off(?) but perhaps its just the web playback. Overall, its almost there, the emotion is certainly in there and its certainly one of the better entries, but for me a few other clips pip it in the acting. The hands waving around and the speed with which she snaps to the sniff detract from the emotion. Excellent job tho :)

Dan Dulberger:

Very enjoying to watch. Only felt the body could've moved abit more and smoother.

Felix:

cool work, great expressions in the hands... no critics yet.

Taber Dunipace:

This is nice. The animation quality is right up there with the best entries, but I see a lot of different emotions flashing through the face really quickly. Also the poses toward the end could be pushed a little more. Nicely done.

thekamps:

great emotion in there

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort!

Virgil Mihailescu:

wow, excellent! captures the right intensity and looks very natural. great stuff!! many stars!! :D

David Shum:

thats strong!
I love how the body tells you her next line, before she delivers it.
Rather than having the pose act out what she just said. Show's alot of internal forces.
Loves it!
Good luck :D

Alexis St-Laurent:

Simple and efficient. Nice. I would have like a little more exageration.

Gregory Marlow:

Oh wow. Good job

Paulo Clayton:

Well done. Saw this one in different WIP stages, seems like the character lost a little bit of acting sincerity. Would like to see the hands open up just a little bit for added emotional gesture.

Victor Wong:

Good facial expression and excellent timing on the arm gestures.

Robert Tighe:

Starts out really strong, then goes off timing a bit, I think. Very nice performance. I believe it!