A moment

Final Rating: 4.82. Finished: 30 out of 71 entries.
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Animator: Shanshan Wu

Description: With so much emotion in the voice, I wanted to bring the feeling inside of her.

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 20 hours

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yeshwanth:

Nice expressions and i liked your posses in a few places.....good luck

Max Herzfeld:

The variety of the pace was really great, but at times the piece was kind of posey.

Great gestures though. I love the "do this," hands. :)

Keep it up,
Max

Eric Huang:

I like the depth of the poses! It's working. Although I don't like the last one very much... she looks like she's asking for money or something.

Tyler Phillips:

The beginning is a little quick and there doesn't seem to be any follow through movement. I think the bottom eyelids shouldn't move down so far in the end. They should either move up in a squint or stay in their neutral position.

Cole Higgins:

almost there. Flesh out her eyes more. Put some animation in her eye lids. Right now there arent moveing and it seems like her eyes are buggung out of her head. Also I feel like shes stappled to the floor and she is unable to move... Makes the animation seems a little stiff.

Aaron Clement:

From 120-190 felt really nice... it worked for that pose you had her in... too much movement at the start, though. Definitly getting there.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Some poses are a little too forced, the double arm grabbing I think is excessive. There's some nice movements nontheless.

Dan Dulberger:

The fast arm movements at the start seems off. Too many poses struck to fast. Good otherwise.

garvey harris:

another star performance, I almost held my breath whilst watching her performance. wicked work

Ezra Allen:

shes looking a bit like golem, I think that Andy mdel is a bit creepy anyway, like something out of a chucky film I think the synch is a bit out. I like that youve tried to use arcs

David Humphreys:

good movements but some of your poses seem a little unrealistic. on frame 127 its more of a pose youd see if someone were sat down or very cold

Daniel Harriman:

Some moving holds would be great for this animation. There are parts of it where the character completely freezes and the "moment" is lost.

Florent Perrin:

perhaps try to make a choice in all those intentions. it seems you want to say to many things at a time.

Mike Courtney:

The lip-sync is off, especially on "was one" at the end.

Simon Bean:

Lovely acting :D

Victor Wong:

About the only thing that's not really synced here are the lips. The gestures work well here.

Felix:

hmmm... okay you tried to let the caracter act. the beginning was not bad, but too strong. then you keept by this barred position what became a very unnatural expression. animation needs more dynamic rebounce and follow troughs ... too mechanical.

Erik Griott:

i think there could be a lot more character in this. all her actions dont say enough about her, like they are taken from a stock of emotional gestures. i do like her starting pose, as if right before her dialogue she had to muster up the courage to come out and say something like this. her final pose isnt really working however. her left arm is getting lost in silhouette, and her right arm looks twisted, like it would hurt to hold it that way.

Phillip Moon:

No bad on the facial and body work.

Taber Dunipace:

The poses get off track in the second half of the animation and she does a repeat gesture which seems unnatural.

Micah Betts:

Pretty good overall but I'm not sold on the expression on her eyes on the last pose. Seems more like she's asking a question than making an assumption

Matt Johnson:

good movement and acting. The eyes are too freaky!

Henning Koczy:

nice acting. Hit a stronger holds/poses with the arms and watch your arcs and this could be great.

Robert Tighe:

Nice work. For me,some transitions are a bit too arcy. I don't think the reversal around fr 41 is necessary. Keep it up!

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort!