Andrew Bina:

Needs more emotion

C. J. Cow:

very subtle. good stuff!

Marcos Borba Moreira:

i thought need more emotion to it

Taylor Potts:

Good job; nothing moves in the wrong way!
But it's almost too subtle. Maybe a head-shake on "I don't know ..." would create some emphasis.

Chris Welsby:

some nice things in there. would maybe have the character moving of the spot more. maybe edging closer to the guy as she starts to get more of an edge to her voice.

Max Herzfeld:

The animation is really nice, but very gentle, timid, and reserved.

It needs more bold character choices.
-That doesn't mean melodramatic, just something that shows us she's a unique individual, rather then a genaric person.

Her face seems as though she should be wispering the dialogue. Which you pull of very well, but the animation has to match the voice.

Overall, really nice work.

Keep it up,
Max

David Ruzicka:

very good

Eric Huang:

smooth motion :)

I really think you can push the expressions though especially since you can't see the rest of the body.

Kristoffer Clark:

very subtle, i really like the facial animation

Tyler Phillips:

Nice subtle acting.

Cole Higgins:

really good think shes needs little more emotion when she starts to think. around frame 103. Not sure what shes thinking

Alex Zemke:

Not afraid to act within the pose! Fantastic!

Aaron Clement:

Good with the depth of field. Her body felt very stiff. Break it up a little, too. Don't have her looking at him for quite as long... have moments where she looks away. Good effort.

P Walters:

Motion could be snappier, nice rendering

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

She needs more movement.

garvey harris:

brilliant lipsynching and all that just not enough emotional expression in her face throughout the speach. - when I used to go to acting classes a suggestion I made that made a lot of sense was that if you were on a bus or a in car and passing by and saw the character acting out the part, without hearing what was being said, how much of the expression and body language tells you what is going on?

I think the key here is resisting, and accusing the other character that they also had a moment of weakness, so far I'm not seeing that being expressed enough

Ezra Allen:

hmmm its not bad, but theres just not enough going on here for me.

David Humphreys:

very rigid, try to free up the shoulders little

Michael Richard:

Since this is such an upclose shot, I would push those facial expressions more.

Florent Perrin:

Subtle little things. Try to avoid the robotic aspect, perhaps? Rigidity kills! :)

Mike Courtney:

I'd have liked to see the boy engaged in the animation. Have him react more to what she's saying. Is he holding her hand? Just an idea.

Dan Dulberger:

Good facial animation. However I find the animation of the torso abit jerky. When you do move the torso it is pretty much always a quick straight interpolation from pose to pose. I think it would've looked more lifelike if some of these were smoothed out somewhat.

Simon Bean:

Lovely subtle acting :D
Because the shot is so tight, the 'clunk clunk' noise at the beginning really stands out as being missing to me. I really like this, i would say as my main crit that you could've just squeezed that bit more emotion out of the scene. There's alot of urgency in her voice at teh beginning that doesn't really show through

Kellie:

I love the gestures, the expressions and the timing. Nicely done!

Taber Dunipace:

I'm missing the arcs and anticipations. Acting is pretty good in this one, but animation could use some work.

Bilal Ahmad:

good work man!

Phil:

Lovely lip sync, could have done with a lot more animation though.

Virgil Mihailescu:

very nice framing. at this level of close up the facial animation should be more detailed though, especially the mouth. looking good, but needs more polish.

Alexis St-Laurent:

It looks good, but it lacks a little bit of emotion in the body movement

Gregory Marlow:

Pretty good facial animation. Cold use some exaggeration here or there.

Matt Johnson:

If you had added a little more animation to the guy it would have sold me. The girl was very well done.

Victor Wong:

Good facial expressions and lip sync.

Henning Koczy:

Well, at least you didnt OVERdo it... good... a little heartbreaking, as much as 240 frames can do that. Nice hopeful look up to him on "resist it," thats my favorite bit of acting so far.

Sean Graham:

This feels like with a little more texture it could be really strong. The sniff reads well. It's real close.