Always a moment
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Andrew Bina:
Nice
Micah Betts:
The first few words seem like they should feel more desperate, otherwise great job and smooth transitions
Taylor Potts:
Nice touch with the extension of the right fingers. Maybe have her eyes open, looking at them but not really looking at them.
David Atkins:
mouth is a bit floaty.. getting there
Chris Welsby:
nice work
David Ruzicka:
Very good. One of the best.
Eric Huang:
Love the subtlety! I feel like there should be a tad more energy in this piece as the audio clip is pretty emotional.
Francisco Martinez:
Nice job. The camara should be closer. More change and expression with mouth. The mouth seems to stay relativly the same size.
Cole Higgins:
nice it looks really good and the emotion is deffineltely there. Though I am not really feeling that the dialogue and the character are one. Its so close. It just feels like theres more coming out of the dialogue than you chose to show.
Dhar:
Very good acting. Love the lighting/atmosphere. Some of the hand gestures are ambiguous.
Tyler Phillips:
Seems a little slow, but nice subtleties.
Michael Li:
Nice. Lip sync is a bit off, but so was mine :P I like the realism of this performance.
Aaron Clement:
Reminds me of Phil Toe's animation clip. I don't like the two shadows there. I think one would be better. Feels a little stiff at times... Good how you worked within the pose.
P Walters:
nice emotion in the eyes. I like how subtle the movements are. makes it feel more believeable. I think it would help if there were some more dynamic or snappier movements worked in there because right now everything seems to be moving at about the same speed.
garvey harris:
when I used to go to acting classes a suggestion I made that made a lot of sense was that if you were on a bus or a in car and passing by and saw the character acting out the part, without hearing what was being said, how much of the expression and body language tells you what is going on?
I think the key here is resisting, and accusing the other character that they also had a moment of weakness, so far I'm not seeing that being expressed enough
Ezra Allen:
a bit too static kind of want her to get up or put her head in her hands or something.
Simon Bean:
LOVELY subtle acting. IMO starts a bit flat. Natalie's "moment" is probably the most enunciated word of the scene but the acting doen't translate that. The "do this" is lovely, the hand sweep a little too snappy- add some secondary IMO. The head shake could have been a little more pronounced. In relation to alot of the other entries here the subtlety really works. Love that final expression. For me, you could have just turned the acting up one notch to really carry the emotion. Hope this helps :) Good work
Mike Courtney:
Lip-sync not there yet. The fingers could use just a touch more attention. Relaxing a bit after holding a fist and such.
Max Herzfeld:
You have some very good simple movements, and great attention to the hands, but the delivery comes off a little reserved. Even for this style of aubtle acting.
Great job in total,
Max
Matt Morris:
nice poses - the clip sounds like it needs a little more energy in her movements, slightly snappier
Phillip Moon:
Nice work with smaller action.
Sean Graham:
Cool! Nice simple work within a pose with enough to keep it alive and feeling natural. Some of the lipsynch could use more work, but really good stuff.
thekamps:
I tend to like the overplayed/exaggerated action better but you won me over with this slower more subtle, emotional one
Virgil Mihailescu:
wow, looks natural, motivated and all. this is acting. great job! the lipsync needs some improvement, but besides that, awesome stuff!
Alexis St-Laurent:
Everything is coming great, but I think it would be more interesting if there was a change of pace in the animation. It all moves at the same time...
Michael Richard:
nice and subtle, nice emotion.
Gregory Marlow:
very very nice. Maybe a little more detail in the lips but otherwise awesome.
Taber Dunipace:
This animation floats around a lot like it's under water. The quality isn't bad at all, but the lack of contrast in timing is very apparent. The acting isn't too bad either except that it lacks punch and seems a little sing-song during the "give in or resist" part. Not a bad attempt at all!
Jeranimo:
I don't see the force of her dialog in her body. Just the lips are moving.
Victor Wong:
More SI/SO is needed in the beginning, especially around the head. Good facial expressions. Nice subtlety with the sob.
Curtis Hunt:
Super stuff. Beautiful subtle stuff with the hand on the knee.
Bilal Ahmad:
nice effort!
Srikanth:
Awesome.......









Animator: Renaud Déchaux
Description: Woman discover the true about her boyfriend.
Experience: This is my first scene with a character speaking and with Maya Software.
Time taken: About 3 weeks.