There's a moment.

Final Rating: 5.47. Finished: 21 out of 71 entries.
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Animator: Roger Feron

Description: Woman struggles emotionally with her icecream.

Experience: 5years

Time taken: 1 week after hours... and a day on the weekend.

Comments:

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Andrew Bina:

Funny

C. J. Cow:

good job

Chris Welsby:

looking good. some nice stuff in there. Only thing I would say is that the performance doesnt quite capture the emotion in the voice, but its a nice piece of work!

Tyler Phillips:

Really nice work. I liked everything about this except it was difficult to see her lips move. I especially like the boy pushing the ice cream away after her little rant.

Eric Huang:

Cool!

Kristoffer Clark:

Great idea and vision. but the lip sync was hard to see

Cole Higgins:

looks good but the emotions on bothg the character is not clear.

Mark Dickie:

I quite like this, simple but effective. I like the move around frame 80 where she grabs the ice cream.

Michael Li:

Great storytelling and use of props! I like the reactions of the support.

Aaron Clement:

Nice, man... very good... I can see you've put a lot of thought process into this... the acting is great, you really get whats going on... good job. One of the better ones.

garvey harris:

nice, thought you let her acting slip a bit towards the end but nicework allround all the same

Ezra Allen:

Ha ha! cool love the prop! nice

Chris Sutherland:

love the scenario and interaction with the prop; guy's expression/pose to finish is good

miles southan:

Nice idea and good poses. You need overlap in the upper body, neck and head though.. they feel a little stiff. Also, you could make some smoother arcs. Follow her nose around frame 24.

Mike Courtney:

The lip-sync isn't quite there yet. The guy's spine seems to be a bit stiff.

Simon Bean:

Some lovely stuff going on here. Imaginitive treatment. My favourite's the end half because its that bit more subtle and suits the clip more. Also, up until then its unclear who she's talking to. Hope that helps :)

Felix:

why all the peeople think of sweeties by this phrase....??

Phillip Moon:

Great body and facial work. Over all, great.

Bilal Ahmad:

good work man!

Virgil Mihailescu:

hihi, funny. the animation is not bad, but the face needs more work. also, the rigs maybe need to allow more deformation on the face

Christiaan Moleman:

I think you could do a bit more with the facial expressions on the girl, in particular the eyebrows. Otherwise nice.

Gregory Marlow:

That was very nice. Characters dont have a lot of facial expressions though.

Taber Dunipace:

The animation quality is pretty decent in this animation and the acting choices seem fair to, but over-all I just feel like there isn't a lot of personality to this scene. Try to get some real specificity of character into your animation and make each character move like a specific type of person, rather than a generic animated character.

Alonso Soriano:

blue shirt is really nicely done. Pink is a little hammed up

Victor Wong:

Generally good timing on the gestures and lip sync overall.

Henning Koczy:

POints for making me laugh.

Sean Graham:

I like it in general. I wish there was a little stronger facial animation in there, but overall, it reads really well.