Jason Pennington:

This is quite good. Some of the poses could be stronger, though. A stronger pose the first time she says "moment". And at the end, the character isn't really showing the bitterness of the line "I bet you there was one"

Love the bow, though. :)

bruno hamzagic:

funny the idea of the red bow in the head :-)
I felt lack of a more synchronism on acting and lipsync, and the handkerchief box could be came after all, to be more detached joke.

Chris Welsby:

i think this is a tricky character to try and convey the facial and especially lip sync side of this piece. some nice animation in the body tho

David Ruzicka:

Very good arms but her whole movement doesn't go with the monologue. I like the bow. I also had to dress up Max.

Tyler Phillips:

I think she could move more up and down in her walk in the beginning. I really like the tissue box idea in the end. Nice weight on the fingers.

Kristoffer Clark:

The animation is good, but the low man character takes away from the animation because of it's lack of facial control

Mark Bogdanoff:

Pretty bow!

Cole Higgins:

close. think her body would be more heavy and slouched. Shes pretty sad and right now her poses say that shes got lots of power in her stance. Nice effort.

Aaron Clement:

I like the bow. The tishues is a nice touch.

garvey harris:

strong start but weak finish, but thats not technical skill, but acting skill that needs improving

Ezra Allen:

Not bad

Carmelo Leggiero:

i will add a little bit more of weight in the walk and when she's on the table! keep up the good work!

David Humphreys:

pac woman lives!

very nice work, the box spinning accross the table couldve had a bit more weight to it though!

Bilal Ahmad:

lipsync could've been more convincing, and in the last sentence of "i can bet!", you could've added more exaggeration

Simon Bean:

The "resist it" pose doesn't do it for me. Not convincing. Generally the animation's good, but the acting isn't subtle and expressive enough to match this clip. Hope that helps :)

Mike Courtney:

Work on poses, for example: the spine could have curved down more towards the table at "give into this" to create a stronger pose.

Max Herzfeld:

Good piece, but try going for bolder character desicions in the movement.

keep it up,
Max

Victor Wong:

Volume is the thing to watch out for, especially when you've good someone coming in for the close-up. Lip sync is good.

Felix:

hmmm use another character with facial expressions... body expression nice. sometimes not so credible acting.

Phillip Moon:

Good body acting.

Taber Dunipace:

This is a fine effort but you really are crippled here by using such a limited rig. For what's here, the acting is nice and the animation is good but it could use a lot more polish and observation of fundamentals.

Virgil Mihailescu:

she's radiating with feminine beauty, hihihihi.
not bad stuff, but acting wise, some of the gestures are a little generic, although well animated. the lispync is partially off, especially at the beginning.

Gregory Marlow:

pretty good

Robert Tighe:

Nice tissue box.