Andrew Bina:

A bit jerky but cool twist on the story.

Micah Betts:

Given the context I think she could have looked more frightened of what she's thinking of

C. J. Cow:

very cool, creeeepy, but cool

yeshwanth:

I liked this animation its very good ...
funny idea ..cheers

Carlos Fins:

Eerie ending there. Hahaha. I think what detracts from this animation is the bit where she wipes her tears before sitting. That's rushed and really feels forced. I'd drop that and have more ime for her to sit down.

Chris Welsby:

this one is a bit grim!

Philip Crow:

It seems a lot of the action in the face, so a little closer shot would help with that, since there wasn't much action below the waist.

Pedro Lopes:

hahaha

Tom Law:

Interesting twist, also I like the animation when she wipes away the tear.

Tyler Phillips:

Woah, pretty dark. I think the sits down a little fast and hard. Nice work.

Cole Higgins:

nice concept. not really feeling her emotions though. Her poses are a little dead. haha. try and animate from the insode out. Choose your poses in incordance with what shes feeling on the inside.

Michael Li:

A bit macabre for me, but I think the performance looked a bit forced.

Aaron Clement:

Nice, I like the ending. Very creative, very good. You get an extra couple of stars for that.

Jamal D. Owens:

Don't really have much to say. Some of the poses may be a little weak in certain areas. Outside of that, good job.

garvey harris:

again no question about whether or not you can animate a character you can but - when I used to go to acting classes a suggestion I made that made a lot of sense was that if you were on a bus or a in car and passing by and saw the character acting out the part, without hearing what was being said, how much of the expression and body language tells you what is going on?

I think the key here is resisting, and accusing the other character that they also had a moment of weakness, so far I'm not seeing that being expressed enough - ok well with him hanging there its different but strong acting but weak on interpretation and expression of the speach

praveen:

i feel he is standing too far to hear her

Ezra Allen:

LOL very dark! should this one have a pg rating?

David Humphreys:

plus points for a good idea!

miles southan:

Not bad. Your poses twin a bit but the overall acting choices are pretty good. You just need to work on the physicality of that walk in and especially the sit down. If you watch her chest during that it zigzags which is never good. You need to figure out what's going to lead and what's going to follow and commit to it.

Brandon Ayers:

The body poses could use a little more exaggeration. The face and hands seem like that's where you concentrated.

Simon Bean:

Acting is a bit rigid. Sniff is timed badly and pose looks awkward. The sit down and head shake is nice because it really suits the ckip. Hope that helps :)

Mike Courtney:

Lip-sync not quite there yet. Spine needs more action during walk at the beginning.

Max Herzfeld:

Wow, what a twist.
With some that unique, the acting should be different as well. Your delivery of the woman character was along the same standard as most entries, but she does something so compleatly out of the ordenary.
You could have done her with more of a desperate homicidal glint in her eye.

great job.
Max

Victor Wong:

More work needed in the lip sync. Gestures are off just a touch; maybe by one frame.

Felix:

okay, nice hands expressions... hmm but needs improvement.

Matt Morris:

the sniff and sit down doesn't work together - I'd use the sniff as an antic for sitting down rather than give it a completely seperate action.

Taber Dunipace:

Taking a poppy cartoon type of animation style and then showing a guy hanging himself really turned me off right away. The gestures and acting aren't bad, but they certainly don't help to sell this concept.

Virgil Mihailescu:

hahahaha, the revealing camera movement at the end is funny. one question - if she doesn't have shoes... how do you explain the sounds she makes when she walks.....? she's funny (because of cartoony timing I guess), and nicely animated. I like when she sits down, the gesture and the couch deformations. that really looks shweeet.

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort!

Gregory Marlow:

holy crap...What???

I think this would have made a lot more sense if she would have been talking toward her dead husband...or whatever.

Choppy sit.

Alonso Soriano:

there's a nice solidity to your poses, but there's not quite the looseness of interconnected muscles. a little too many hand gestures and vaudiville facial stuff, especially for such a serious subject. I assume it's the model but the mouth looked very uniform in shape