There's a moment...
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Andrew Bina:
nice
Cole Higgins:
feels a little stiff. almost there.feel like you should animate the whole body, even though shes sitting. She feels like just a torso and has no lower body. Also dont just animate to the camera. Work in perspective view as well.
Tyler Phillips:
It was nice, though I think it could be polished a little more.
Aaron Clement:
I came up with similar staging for my shot, too. Not too bad. Watch the timing... don't have everything hit at the same time... break it up a little... good staging.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
The lipsync is nonexistant. Most of the poses could use refinement.
Jamal D. Owens:
Good. Work on your timing just a little. The lip sync may be a little off as well. Outside of that, good job.
Ezra Allen:
Not bad, needs a little more movement I think, she needs to lean into the camera or slump on the table to give a bit more variety to the poses. At the start the hand on the face loooks very stiff you need to work on that to make it look like she is actually touching her face.
garvey harris:
somre strong acting but got weak towards the end
Ramit Batra:
Nice anim. You could have added more details in the eyes and brows.
Bilal Ahmad:
nice one
Mike Courtney:
Lip-sync isn't there yet, "always" wasn't accented enough. Wrists are a bit rigid.
Simon Bean:
Some nice stuff here
Victor Wong:
Lip sync isn't quite there yet, but the gestures work well with the dialogue.
Taber Dunipace:
For some reason this keeps coming up as badly synced for me. Ignoring that, the animation is really restricted here and could use some loosening up. Also you could use better observance of principals.
Michael Richard:
looks like it's got a lot of potential... massage those curves and work on emotions and the mouth shapes and it look much better.
Gregory Marlow:
needs polish
Sean Graham:
Lip sych's a little off here, and the phonemes could use a lot of work. You've got a few pops and intersections with the table, but it's pretty smooth overall.









Animator: xu
Description: Its my first time join the 11 second club competition, i am pretty enjoy it. for this piece of dialog i wanted to keep simple and emotional. hope u guys like it,Any comments will be appreciated. thanks
Xu
Experience: one year half
Time taken: 7 days