Moment
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C. J. Cow:
i love the character, lol.. soo cute
Jason Pennington:
well done. one of the strongest entries, good animation principles. I get the impression that the lipsync is well done too, but the way the character holds her head, I can't really see it. Seems a little awkward to have all of that motion just out of view on her head. Pointing the camera from a lower angle would help.
Mike Clark:
I like your spacing but the staging could be stronger.
Chris Welsby:
nice
Eric Huang:
Very nice! My only crit is that last pose... it's just not working for me. Other than that, it's awesome!
nideep:
cool dude!!
Israel Woolfolk:
I wish i could see the mouth...I feel the teeth are a little distracting, other than that i like it.
Cole Higgins:
moves well but I dont feel what shes feeling. her emotions and poses are not clear.
Tyler Phillips:
I like the concept. Great animation and acting.
Aaron Clement:
Good... not sure about the pose to pose feel.
Ozgur Yildirim:
soo cute :)
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Nice animation, the character is a little too cartoony, and the teeth and glasses are in the way to see the expressiveness in the fase. The animation looks nice.
Roger Feron:
Nice!
garvey harris:
i felt that the acting could've been stronger, and that the skills to animate are there but it wasn't shown, but good work and showed a lot of potetial,just need to strengthen interpretation
Ezra Allen:
nice
Bilal Ahmad:
lipsync is not that much registered and the facial expressions can be more stronger...
Jarred de Beer:
Very nice acting! I like the teeth, but here they hide the lip sync somewhat, perhaps you should have made greater mouth movements. The sniff and whipe of her hand is very nice, and well done for not putting her hands under the table (which almost everyone has done). Lovely piece of animation
Florent Perrin:
Loved the rythm here. Beware of the hands, who are very "symmetric"...
Simon Bean:
Re-think your coverage! You've framed the camera to totally obscure the mouth movement. The movements are fluid- you can obviously animate but the acting isn't particularly expressive. In fact the expression stays pretty much the same throughout, despite at the end there being a pretty clear change in the tone of voice after "I bet...". Hope that helps :) Good effort
Mike Courtney:
Movements are just a bit jerky. Consider hiding the teeth so lip-sync is more visible.
miles southan:
Great job! I wish I could see her mouth though. Maybe you could change the camera angle or cheat her head up more. Maybe it's just me but I dont think the nose wipe makes sense with the sniff sound. People wipe there noses after they sniff in my experience, not during. Also, you could get some overlap on the head during "was but"
Matt Garward:
Some good subtle acting, and animation is good (the hand wipe across the nose is very nice) but that model's giant teeth makes it hard to make out any of the lipsync. I would have liked to see mouth expressions to show the emotion better. :)
Max Herzfeld:
The small movements are so cute, and indearing. I really Like the character you've created.
Her situations a little unclear though.
Also when she says "moment, theres always..." her hands slide forward when I think just the body should move.
You could have her react more surprised by the beating of the stick, because it looks like that's what motivates her into talking.
This was really enjoyable to watch.
Great job,
Max
Taber Dunipace:
I like the acting a lot in this one and it's almost accentuated by the fact that I can't see her mouth. The setting is working well with the piece, and the animation is very pleasing to watch.
Gregory Marlow:
Nice. Mooms teeth are blocking her lip sych though. And possibly adding an element to her character that isnt really there in the audio.
Looks really good otherwise though.
Greg
Victor Wong:
The eyebrows could be a bit more expressive, but the timing of the gestures and the lip sync work very well here.
Henning Koczy:
A little too animation-ey. Should be more in the face, you over-animated the body.
Robert Tighe:
Great! The last pose is nice but feels inappropriate for the line. WOOT!
Srikanth:
Looks Awesome....
Sean Graham:
I like it.









Animator: HariNarayan
Description: An Interrogation !!
Experience: 1
Time taken: 10 hrs