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Carl Slate:
I would suggest not animating your camera except to follow motion (like when people are walking), and for dramatic effect. Like, DRAMATIC dramatic, such as sharp jumps and twists between static moments. The constant motion just makes the camera feel swingy/slippery and weird. The characters look done quite well, I think it's mostly the flying camera that impacts this animation negatively.
Sofia Conciarelli:
I like it, expecially the labial, but the camera moves too much
Ezra Allen:
It's snowing?
Celia:
Excesive camera movement.
Animator: Tristan A
Description: Mine is a good meh i believe.
Experience: 2-3 years
Time taken: less than a month.