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Meditation takes practice

by Lore De Jonghe

Final Rating: 6.21. Finished 23 out of 282 entries.

6,257 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Lore De Jonghe

Description: He took his friend to the place that gives him the freedom to be himself, but he doesn't get it at all.

Experience: 6 months

Time taken: 2-3 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Bret Kauppila:

I like the way the second guy opens his eyes and smiles at 206. Pretty good body language on the first guy as well. If there was an improvement I was to make, it would be to make their mouths open a bit more when speaking.

Emily Lawton:

Very good character acting but it's far too subtle and needs to exaggerated more to be readable

Frank O:

Good work. I like how you posed the character in lotus by using the design aspects of the character rig (Malcolm?) to find an appealing result.

Jamie F:

Nice body mechanics

Christopher Pohl:

got some good body acting in there. Face expressions feel like they dont change much and the lip sync feels a bit off or weak

Ryan R.:

I really liked the movement of the characters, but I feel like the lip syncing could have been pushed a little bit more. The main speaker barely opens his mouth when speaking, I feel like it could have been pushed a bit more in that aspect.

Mike M.:

What's wrong with the legs of your secondary character? The angle of his legs are impossible even for an animation.