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by Ben T

Final Rating: 2.01. Finished 322 out of 330 entries.

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Animator: Ben T

Description: Basic Boy gets a badge

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

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Gaethan Bracke:

A bit low quality clip but as far as animation goes: I see you have lip sync everywhere and it matches the sound clip quite well as far as I can tell. However, the body is too stiff. The arms especially move slowly and always at the same speeds. Changing the timing can improve this a lot as timing is, imo, one of the most important things in animation. The faces can use some more emotion in them. Move those eyebrows! And don't forget to do more with the mouths than only open and close the chin. Smile, cry, laugh, frown... I like the pose of the woman at the end after she says "It's a human insult" (not sure what is up with the going down part though)

Tom Islava:

Image quality, and is that Anna from Frozen?

Jessica Cain:

It's blurry. Hard to critique when you can't see what's going on.