Comments:
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Benjamin Arzt:
There are too many cuts in here which makes it really hard to follow the action. Imaging cuts being something like blinks. Quick cuts like these are more suited for a fast action scene and less for a rather clam dialogue like this.
Maribel Orozco:
Maybe lose a cut or two from the beginning, its a bit disorienting as it is. One establishing shot with the 3 other characters together should be enough to tell the audience whats going on.
Zachary Checkeye:
Too many cuts!
Imani Jay:
Your cuts are very rapid and startling almost - slow down the pacing a bit camera wise
Matheus:
Too jumpy.
Kyle Newton:
Those camera cuts are jarring. Stop doing that.
Ben Hall:
Need 12 principles of animation here
Aaron McGriff:
Maybe fewer cuts would be more effective.
Animator: Adriana Manquero
Description: A love-struck young man tries to save his crush and her brother from their capture. Too bad he is lacking a lot of credibility.
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 4 days