Final Rating: 6.06. Finished 20 out of 218 entries.

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Animator: Jason Weilee

Description: An unfortunate prison truck driver is held against his will.

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Malcolm character courtesy of AnimSchool.com
Craig and Argus characters courtesy of Long Winter Studios

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

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Elizabeth Dik:

If you're pushing someone's head into something, your hand would stay touching their head until they hit the object, thus making it a forced thing, then the hand would move to the shoulder to keep them down

Richard Adams:

Concept was really good until the gunman revealed himself to the gate man, hurting this entry. But you got the emotions across very nicely, the breathing, the fear the driver is trying to disguise.

Dharmender Rai:

Good idea

Kyle Newton:

Some of the best context to this dialogue I've seen so far. Motions are just a bit gradual at times. It doesn't need too much snappiness for the context, but it could use a little more, especially on the push.

Ben Hall:

could use more movement and sometimes they aren't moving enough to keep them alive

John McSwiggin:

I'm confused, did the prisoner kill the driver?
Either way, great lip sync, story, and small movement details.

Victor Pierce:

Really cool story you've created there! Nice job