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talking heads..!!

by vaishali

Final Rating: 3.64. Finished 149 out of 218 entries.

398 views including the voting period.

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Animator: vaishali

Description: conversation between a young boy and a clay head.

Experience: 1 month

Time taken: 2 days

Comments:

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Keshav kourav:

concept was good but execution is weak ...specially in last closeup scene....But I like the way u caught the dialogue

Pamela Rivera:

Give more expression to the main character. The head is ok, it's like a robotic face, but the other character should show an opposite feeling or attitude.

Michaela Dawn:

Needs more movement

Christopher Winn:

I don't understand the story here.

Nathaniel Vaughan:

I have only one question: Why would a bust ask about soda?

Kyle Newton:

That last shot was uncomfortably close to his face. It would feel more natural to keep it distant and have more body acting involved.

Ben Hall:

Need 12 principles of animation here