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Imprison them in Prison

by Vincere Amlan

Final Rating: 4.58. Finished 80 out of 218 entries.

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Animator: Vincere Amlan

Description: A policeman is having a conversation with another man who is taking two persons, without realizing who they were. After realizing the truth he tells the policeman that he is delivering them to prison.

Experience: Student

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Pamela Rivera:

the acts are really slow, and I feel kind of a robotic feeling on the guy that is suppose to be alive. Specially in the interpolation of the poses... needs more work on the timing and the breakdowns.

Phuc Truong:

Eyes are at the default position. move the eyelids more closer to the pupils for more realism.

Holden Van Houten:

All of the characters have basically the same bored expression. Spruce em up a bit, add some character.

Maribel Orozco:

Stiff, but its a nice start

Richard Adams:

Extremely floaty. Idea is good, good rendering, body language decent. Faces need a lot more emotional expressiveness and fix the floatiness (you let the computer do too much of the in-betweening).

Michael Smith:

more exateration.

Kyle Newton:

Those eyes and brows are oddly stiff during conversation.

Ben Hall:

movements could be smoother and poses can be much stronger