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Encounter difficulties

by Su Wei-Yi

Final Rating: 5.43. Finished 41 out of 290 entries.

602 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Su Wei-Yi

Description: A man teach you how to solve the problem when you face difficulty.
It's my first time to make a talking scene. Expect everyone advice.

Experience: 6 months

Time taken: 3 days

Comments:

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Geoff Simmonds:

Very nice strong poses and acting. Part where he says "Trying to kill me" is a strange hand gesture that I don't think goes with the dialogue. But overall, nice strong animation.

Katharine Makaiwi:

I like all the poses your character goes through, I think your lip sync needs some more work. You have his jaw opening up too much, the jaw doesn't need to move up an down with every word. Might help to stick your arm under jaw and recite the lines your self to get a feel for how much the jaw actually moves. Otherwise I do think your animation looks pretty good.

Michael McKnight:

Animations are very well done and lip sync is quite good. However it would benefit to have another character in the scene to work off of.

Fernando Incetta:

Good posing and appeal. Lip sync could be better. Also, his right foot coming up around 175 looks odd, since we were looking at him from a straight shot.

Imon Branch:

too light of the background