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Tiki Bar Advice

by Jarl

Final Rating: 4.73. Finished 76 out of 290 entries.

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Animator: Jarl

Description: Sage advice from the guy who's seen it all!

Experience: VFX rigger (no professional work experience as an animator)

Time taken: evenings and weekends

Comments:

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Geoff Simmonds:

Nice start but feels a little unfinished. Lipsynch drops out a bit from time to time.

Hacho:

cute style!

John:

Pretty good, but you forgot to make him blink :)

Otávio Neres:

Maybe the anticipation before the "we're going to kill you" part was a bit too long? I like some subtle moves, how about trying to push the poses even further? Also, take a look at moving holds, it will be golden for you!

Keep up!

Nick Barbour:

Mouth doesn't match up to certain parts, seems a little laggy

Fernando Incetta:

Good use of secondary action.

Avinash Kharat:

good work ! just check out the eyes because its floating.eyes are going withe in the end part

Imon Branch:

cleaver scene