Comments:
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Isadora Morales Chaves:
Key poses and staging are very important.
Coffee N Milk:
U can close up the character more
Imon Branch:
no movement at all body movement lacks but on the other hand the background is good.
Deanna Martin:
Character is very stiff, there should be some weight shifting from side to side.
When character's hand goes up to his chest at the "and I'll be like" part it kind of freaks out. also I would have taken the time to turn off what ever guide is floating in front of your characters face off, as well as edit out the film gate. It's kind of distracting.
I also feel like seeing as you chose to have one camera angel on a static character it would not hurt to be closer to the character so we can be more focused on him, instead of the VERY shinny background.
Animator: Nick Barbour
Description: This is an animation for the competiton I worked on still need a lot of practice but, This is my first attempt
Experience: 5 months
Time taken: 8 hours