Final Rating: 8.03. Finished 2 out of 290 entries.

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Animator: Coffee N Milk

Description: He explaining while cooking

Experience: 2 Year ++

Time taken: 1 week ++

Comments:

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sandeepkumargoje:

nice animation........

Jordan Lewers:

This is nicely done, and the motion blur was put to great use! I had a good time examining this frame-by-frame

Fernando Incetta:

That's not the right way to cut carrots. Oh, your animation, yes, I forgot. Super awesome!!!

Michael Kasiurak:

Excellent!!

Yaer:

good!

Divyam Chand:

Brilliant...the composition, acting, movements...all in all...my favorite this month :)

OceanicBoy Joey:

I love how the actions really are! and the rendering and stuff!

Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui:

good shot !

Lee Mei Fong:

animation very nice xd

Dan Harriman:

So good! This is a pleasure to watch! If I had to nit pick I'd take the last smear move out, where he says 'then they would leave'. I don't see why he has to return to that point and do it so fast. Perhaps if he moved less than half that distance without the smear?

Messi Toland:

This is really amazing staging and brilliant story - and most importantly excellent animation. i love how he has a completely separate secondary actions going on - i have learned watching this

Jason Wellings:

Technically the animation is awesome. Love the snappy style. I've got it in my top three. A few small things for me.

One is the lip sync. It's hard to tell exactly what the problem is. It almost feels like the audio is off by about 2 or 3 frames. This could be your animation or it could be that the file you uploaded is off - this happened to me a few entries ago. My personal playbast was different than the file everyone voted on. Sometimes the mouth looks a little too chattery as well.

The second thing is that the actions, while very entertaining and technically sound, don't quite fit the audio. Once the big gestures start everything feels too big.

Great work though!

John Leland:

really good, i liked the portrayal of the two sides of the conversation and the "DEAD" pose.

Anaïs Mirliaz:

I like this one ! The lipsynch feels a little weird but I like the overall cartoonish feeling of the action !

Rodrigo Torres:

Great arcs!

Rockboy Suvankar Koley:

good

Davit Martirosyan:

Greate work, 1- st place for me!!

Connor Leuck:

I like that he's doing something not directly related to death.

Everything else is stellar

Imon Branch:

wow that was fantastic

WeiLiu:

absolutely winner!